[FFML] [MST] [Ranma] [Alt Universe] [MultiCroosover]DeathAndRebirthAlternate Version2

Mythril Moth mythrilmoth at mythrilmoth.net
Fri Aug 2 08:55:13 PDT 2013


> No.
>
> Actually I was trying to be nice, by ignoring the insults, and give you a 
> chance to give me -real- C&C maybe.

You never listen to the advice people on this list give you, so why should 
we bother trying to give you any? It's less stressful and more enjoyable to 
riff the hell out of your posted "works".

But if you want real C&C? Here's some:

Write an actual story. Don't just write a smattering of it that explains its 
entire backstory in a few lines and then gets around to setting up the 
actual plot at the very end.

Because that's all you ever do. I can honestly not remember a time you have 
written more than a short treatment of one of your "fics".

Try it, just once. Just to see if you can.

There's my advice.


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