[FFML] [Fanfic][AU][Sailor Moon] MMSS 4 - History Lessons and Mounting Up

[DB Sommer]

StudioPC wrote:
> And the Maddness continues.
>   

> They emerged from the hallway onto a walkway. The room was dimly lit,  
> but there was the sense of vastness, huge and empty. Below and in the  
> distance, they could see large silvery cubes that glowed with a soft  
> light.
>   

% Oh, good, Cosmic Cubes to keep things going. :)

>
> "Imperial Battle Zords," Serentity said. "Biomechancial tanks powered  
> by shamanistic magic. They are living machines and bonded to the  
> Senshi who drives them." She sounded incredibly pleased.
>   

% Heh. Sounds nice.

> "The Zord is imprinting on her," Serenity told them, answering Usagi  
> and Minako's unspoken question. "They are bonding." The Orb seemed to  
> be looking at them. "And yes, you two will do the same."
>   

%This should be nice

> "Humor is the philosophical expression of sadisim," Minako said,  
> lapsing into an impression of Makoto. "Laughing is the acceptance of  
> that." She paused. "Dude."
>   

% Heh

> "Queen Serenity's rein was known as the Silver Millenium," Artemis  
> said proudly. "We had safety, security, and thrived in a rennisance 

% This is misspelled


> of  
> science and art."
>
> "Artemis, please." Serenity sounded embarassed. "I did nothing more  
> then my duty."
>
> Rei nodded. "Now tell me about Beryl."
>
> Artemis sighed. "Beryl is . . . was Serenity's oldest sister. They  
> were both excellent mages, and Beryl had their father's tatical  
>   

% tactical

> "It was for those reasons that I was named Heir Primus," Serenity  
> said. "After Father died, I named her Govenor of Earth."
>
> "I would want her somewhere far away, personally," Usagi said. "Pluto,  
> maybe. Someplace with absolutely nothing there."
>
> Artemis' expression twitched, but only Minako saw, and it didn't  
> really register.
>
> "I had suspicions about Father's death and there were politics to  
> consider, unfortunutly.\
% unfortunately

% I don't think you ran this through spell check


>  The Senate was unwilling to throw Beryl out of  
> the line of sucession entirely and I felt that if I exiled her, it  
> would only lead to more trouble.

% As long as you don't send her somewhere that she can establish a power 
base, it would be fine.


>  Besides, she was still my sister and  
> family . . . means a great deal to me. Earth was prestigious enough to  
> prevent wagging tounges, close enough that I could discreetly keep an  
> eye on her, and would hopefully keep her busy enough so that she  
> wouldn't cause any trouble."
>   

% OOps

> "Beryl was weak enough from fighting Serenity, and arrogant enough  
> that I managed to lock her and her generals in a prision 

% prison


> "What's wrong, freak? Scared?" Mai's smile was nasty and Ami realized  
> that Mai was holding a Bokken.

% bokken

>  With a lurch, Ami felt her stomach drop  
> to her feet and her heart jump into her throat. The teachers wouldn't  
> come to help her. No one would. Even they hated her. She'd heard them  
> complaining that they had no idea what to do with her, and why was she  
> there anyway? 

% If she's that smart you think they'd jump her grades, then. It always 
looks prestigious to teach prodigies.

>
> "Guess Ami aint

% ain't


> Mai stood there, mouth agape and Ami suddenly realized that Mai wasn't  
> that scary at all. Ami was actually taller then her. It was only Mai's  
> agressiveness and her gang that made her look so big and scary.

% And that she's devious enough to employ both.


> "There's this awesome garden near the temple. Totally restores balance  
> to your mellow." She produced an MP3 player from her bag. "Major  
> groove time." She wandered off, whistling.
>
> Ami stood there in the courtyard, wondering what she should do now.  
> Doctor Hinako Mizuno M.D. PhD viewed religion as an outdated social  
> crutch that was only present because of misguided nostalgia. Shrines  
> were to be respected for their historical value, but were otherwise  
> worthless.
>
> "I'm told this shrine is almost a thousand years old." Said Artemis'  
>   

old," said

> Artemis nodded grimly. "Exactly. You need to be able to harness your  
> anger. That's what I want to talk to you about." He looked at the  
> great tree. "Beryl will be beaten someday. After that, the Imperium  
> will need to be rebuilt.

% Translation: We'll become the conquorers then.

> "Don't enjoy that bond too much. The Zords have been known to asorb  
> pilots who get too asorbed in the bond," Serenity told her and Rei  
> blinked, wondering if Serenity was teasing her or not. The compartment  
> was big enough for exactly one person. A recling

% reclining


> "Six hours. I warned you that the Zords tend to asorb 

% absorb


% Again, nice work