[FFML] [XOver][R.5/Bleach] Pale Horse Chapter One: The Technique

[Timothy Groves]

skychan wrote:
> Wow, I'm impressed, a Bleach crossover I actually like.  Normaly through no
> fault of Bleach itself I cant stand the crossovers.
Mine is the first I have encountered. :)
>   You however have
> intrigued me.  I think that Cologne was a bit too forthwright about it, and
> Happy a bit too clear.  It might have been better if it was not in fact just
> some amazon technique but rather that she helps Ranma translate Happy's
> writing.  She can still pass on all the information but it seems less likely
> that she would give help to keep him from killing himself over one of Happys
> techniques than give away the village's knowledge for free.  You might even
> have her require him to let her copy or have happosai's original scroll for
> her help.
>   
These are good points, and I shall make a note of them for the final 
version.

Thanks for writing!

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