On Jan 25, 2007, at 11:13 AM, Arthur Hansen wrote:

On 1/25/07, StudioPC <studiopc@sbcglobal.net> wrote:

Disclaimer: Doctor Who is owned by the BBC, Harry Potter is the
creation of J.K. Rowling, no money is being made from this, and no
such intent should be inferred.

Don't take this the wrong way, but right now you really don't have a
crossover this chapter. You just have borrowed a couple of names from
Harry Potter.
There are some really big things that are being ignored by Hermione
and Janet, namely that she was *murdered.* And considering Hermione's
list of enemies in the Wizarding world, most likely a wizard.

Precisely.

And, as David Johnston noted, it's not really a Doctor Who story,  
either. It certainly has a few Time Lords in it, but it's rare that  
the Doctor doesn't get thrown in at the deep end. StudioPC, I suggest  
that you evaluate where you're taking this story and consider if you  
aren't strangling the plot.

(I certainly hope you have something good planned for when magic  
intersects the Doctor; it's one of the few things that, iirc, just  
doesn't show up in Doctor Who. Psionics, sure. Hokey alien invasions,  
go for it. But magic is almost always science underneath.)

Jon

I am a leaf on the wind.
Watch how I soar.




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