David Johnston wrote:

I went out looking for fanfic based on the Black and White computer 
game.  What I found was, needless to say, disappointing.  A collection 
of journals of other people's games for the most part.  I think there's 
more potential for exploration than that.

Sharks


"Would have been better if they'd just let the sharks eat you," the old
man grumbles as he glares at me.
 

<snip>

That is so cool.

The writing is rough but the content is interesting.

I never could get far into the game before the mechanics really annoyed 
me... but the premise is really interesting.

Do you plan to do more of this?

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 / Here lies:\  Ryougasai... the eternal lost hentai.
|   Andrew    | 
|             |
|   I think   |          Andrew Petalik
| he's hungry | Opportunity knocks but rarely. Don't let it
|             | slip between your fingers when it does.


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