--- Eric Holdt <dragonboy1098@hotmail.com> wrote:
<snip>
 

Isn't it supposed to be an evil female who

rants? :D

Oh, not necessarily.  Naga the Serpent does a bit of
ranting when Lina's 
involved in some way, right?

Point.  I've never seen Slayers, that's why :D

Smarter, sure?  Braver, probably not.  Heroic...

who

was the one who saved Lenard's life? :D

Probably right, but try convincing her of that. ;p

No thanks.  I'll stick with the easy stuff... like
saving the world every month.

Lenard grinned modestly.  "Well, it's what any real
champion would do,
isn't it?  Of course, I'd hate for you to be put in

a

situation-"

(Darksoar rolls his eyes)

Heh, naivety mixed with a pure heart.  What can ya
do? *shrug*

Say, "They're all gonna die." Heh.

'Now, Melissa, I'll show you who has the better
champion.  Just you
wait!  ...Oh, and you'd better stay alive, too. 

You

need to be here so I can
rub your face in my success.'

Ya know, one of these days, Isabel is going to

go

overboard trying to show up Melissa and probably

get

her 'valiant champion' killed.

The same could probably be said for Melissa, though
I'd have more faith in 
Louie's survival skills over Lenard's.

Same here.

demons were headed for Louie and the other two and
didn't seem to have
acknowledged her or Merrill yet.  She had to get
Louie's attention
without attracting the demons, because if they came
after her and Merrill,

Throw a dagger at his feet!

Thought about it, and was even considering using it,
but the other way 
seemed to work just as well.  Plus, it gives Merrill
an extra dagger to use 
later. :p

True, good point.

The staff grew brighter, and Ila froze in midair.
Louie let out a
grunt of exertion.  "Damn...heavy."

And then Ila's eyes flew open.  "DID YOU JUST

CALL

ME FAT, YOU BIG, STUPID LUG?"

Well, there's still next time. ;)

A request!  Write a similar scene in one of the
upcoming chapters and then make Ila react like that! 
I'd love it! 

Her eyes widened.  "You performed levitation? 

That's

amazing!
Levitation is a pretty high level spell."

"Yeah, but I have to admit it was pretty hard. 

You're

a lot heavier
than the rocks and sticks that I've been using it

on."

Mouth in foot syndrome strikes!

Mouth...in foot?  o_O  I can't even envision how that

works.

Err, meant foot in mouth syndrome.  But I'm sure you
knew that! 

Now he had three women looking like they wanted to
knock him out the
window.

Run, Louie, run!

To where?  He's standing in a window many feet off

the ground with 

monsters 
waiting below.

Heh, I'd take the monsters over dealing with 3 angry
women any day!

"Well, I'm open to any more suggestions you girls
might have."

Cast my boy, like you've never casted before!

Unfortunately, Louie isn't well known for

successfully casting more 

than 
about three spells in one day.

Maybe he should cast a really big spell with area
effect behavior.  If he has one; doubt it though.

Dave Wong

a.k.a. DarkWing
"Let's get dangerous"

Website: www.geocities.com/darksoar/start.html

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