Shikamaru answered with one of his lazy grins.  "Play again?"

Hinata smiled back and nodded.

It took some time, but eventually, Hinata finally captured the king.

End


Well, it was my first attempt at writing anything truely WAFFy, so I pray
that it goes over well.

That was excellent. And it would fit into the canon as we see Hinata
slowly develop a stronger backbone.

Good to know.  Since I haven't seen any anime past what's been shown on CN, 
I'm not even close to the big long filler section, so I'm glad this seems to 
fit in.

Point of contention though, I don't think Temari would cripple Kiba
over a picture. She may give him a knock on the head... but more would
be unreasonable... even for her. I think that Shino would object to
such violence against one of his clan, especially over something so
trivial.

I'll admit that I probably went just a little OoC with Shino and Temari in 
that story, what with Temari being rather overemotional, and Shino 
being...emotional at all. ^_^  But it could basically be chalked up to both 
having a rather bad day and being a bit grouchy.

I assume you wrote the story of Temari and Shino getting together? If
so, congrats. I liked that one as well.

We did, and thank you very much for the comments on both! ^_^

Eric 'Dragonboy' Holdt

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