Subject: [FFML] Re: [fanfic][Meitantei Conan] Judgement Call
From: DB Sommer
Date: 6/26/2006, 11:14 AM
To: The Eternal Lost Lurker
CC: FFML <ffml@anifics.com>

Doing another one, which has been done a lot, but hey, I wasn't one of 
them, and can you realistically have too much C+C?

The Eternal Lost Lurker wrote:

"So...do you have a girl you like, Conan-kun?"
 


Conan (fused with Quagmire) : Why yes, I have lots of them. Thank god 
I'm a pedophile or I'd probably go nuts stuck in this body..

"My name isn't Edogawa Conan," he said softly, in a completely different
tone of voice than he had been using to date.

"...what?" she asked, blinking.

The boy rolled his eyes. "Barou! Who would have a stupid name like that?
Didn't you see the books I was leaning against when you asked me what my
name was? Edogawa Ranpo, Conan Doyle...I made it up on the spot out of
panic."
 


Ran: Wait, you mean Conan isn't a Japanese name? Damn, all this time 
when I read the books I thought he was Japanese. That probably means 
Arthur Doyle wasn't part Japanese either, huh?




He glowered at her. "Just because I'm little doesn't mean I'm helpless, you
know."
 


Conan: I got these really kick ass tennis shoes that can strike like I 
can leg press a thousand pounds.

Suddenly, her hands flew to her mouth and her eyes widened. "Oh my god...I
told you...on the way here..." Her face turned very red. "I said those
things..."
 


And now the accusations about deceptions and how she can never trust him 
begin, and she'll break up with him over it.

"Suffocating...breasts..."
 


"It's like you're suddenly a C cup instead of your usual A size."

Conan was then pummeled unmercifully into a pile of goo.

And so ended the first night of Shinichi's strange new life as a small boy
named Edogawa Conan.

*But,* he mused as he drifted off to sleep in the arms of the girl he loved
more than anything in the world, *at least I'm not alone...*
 


% interesting variation on the series. Despite the change I don't think 
it would be persuing, but an age difference thing of this magnatude 
wouldn't catch my insterest, I guess.

Anyway, nice read. Since it was mostly dialogue there was little I would 
change.

DB Sommer

 



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