Subject: [FFML] Re: [spamfic][Naruto/Kingdom Hearts] Keyholes And Other Holes With Sticks In
From: DB Sommer
Date: 6/25/2006, 10:08 PM
To: The Eternal Lost Lurker
CC: FFML <ffml@anifics.com>


Getting back to doing at least some C+C since there is so many people going
out of their way to give it:


 >
 >It was perhaps the strangest thing any of the Leaf jounin present could
 >remember ever seeing.

Which would mean a lot, given what's been happening in that series.

 >
 >And given recent history, that was saying a lot.

Amen

 >
 >"Get back here!" the boy with spiky brown hair and deep blue eyes 
cried. "I
 >need to lock the Keyhole!"

Hmm. Why not names, I wonder.

 >
 >"My ass you do!" the black-haired boy running from him called over his
 >shoulder.
 >
 >"EXACTLY! THAT'S WHERE IT IS!"

This isn' good. I should have known since it's Lurk, but...

 >
 >"Oi oi," groused the leader of the pack of blonde, whisker-faced,
 >orange-clad ninja running just behind the brown-haired boy, 
"Sasuke-bastard
 >already has enough sticks crammed up his ass without you putting THAT in
 >there, too!"

Well,  he has a point.

 >
 >THAT, as it was, was a giant key with a heart-shaped handguard around the
 >swordlike hilt, with a charm dangling from a silver chain at the back 
which
 >reminded many present of the hairstyle of one of the onlookers.

Hmm. Not familiar with the item, if I should be.

 >
 >Said onlooker tapped the pink-haired girl standing beside her on the
 >shoulder. "Ano, Sakura...that weird kid with the big goofy shoes wants to
 >stick that big key up your teammate's...um..." She flushed.
 >
 >"...." Sakura replied.

Yeah, that was pretty much it.


 >
 >"Kakashi, shouldn't you be helping your student?"

If it's not life threatening, he won't.

 >"Then shouldn't you be helping get this over with? I mean, you're Konoha's
 >master of sticking things up people's butts..."
 >
 >"Why, Kurenai-chan, are you coming on to me?"
 >
 >"PERVERT!"

% What, she pretty much said he was. All he's doing is  agreeing with
her.

 >
 >"My idea of fun isn't watching a thirteen-year-old boy having a giant key
 >shoved up his rear end."
 >
 >"Then I haven't trained you nearly well enough."

Hmm. She never came across as that devient to me.

 >
 >
 >Sasuke turned around. "Got him, NarutWHATTHEHELLAREYOUDOINGDOBE?!"

Why did he say 'DOBE" since it shouldn't be affecting his voice that way,
other than talking in 'yelp'

 >
 >"Thanks for your help, Naruto," Sora said as he continued to vigorously
 >polish the Keyblade with a rough, wet cloth.

And wearing gloves, I would hope.

 >
 >
 >"Ano...Bobobo? I know you're the master of the Fist of the Nose Hair and
 >all, but...don't you think you should see a doctor about this cold? I 
mean,
 >those things coming out of your nose don't look especially healthy..."

Don't know that series.

Disgustingly amusing, I must say.

DB Sommer

 



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