Subject: [FFML] Re: [AYA] Wild, Wild East - Chapter 2 - Arrested Developments
From: GL Sandborn
Date: 3/18/2006, 5:06 PM
To: The Eternal Lost Lurker
CC: FFML <ffml@anifics.com>

The Eternal Lost Lurker wrote:

                2   Arrested Developments
   


Tina's boobs in handcuffs?
 

ACK!  NO!   (BAD Lurker, Bad!)   ;-)

 

    Pulling her rumpled nightshirt tighter around her
 chest, she blinked and tried to remember what happened
 after that.  As hard as she tried, it always came back to
 that black hole in what should have been a critical part
 of her evening.  There were lots of drinks, a few noisy
 patrons, fowl-smelling cigarette smoke hanging heavily in
   


Gotta hate cigarette smoke that smells like poultry...
 

DOH!  'foul-smelling'


 

 Eventually, one unearthly screech worked its way free as
 the girl scrambled on all fours down the hall towards the
 nearest exit.
   


Doesn't handle stress well, that one...poor Tae-chin...
 

Although you have to admit, it really fits her character.  ^_^


 

    "There," Aoi said with a pained smile, "I knew she
 had a reasonable explanation."
    "You believe her?" Kaoru asked.
    "Of course not.  However, I am certain she believes
 what she told us is the truth and that is almost as good
 as the truth itself."
   


*SNRK*
 

Sometimes, I just love Aoi's logic.

    "Karousama, please tell me you moved Mr. Hunter to
   


Kaoru-sama, maybe?
 

I think you are right.

 

    "Yes, headquarters where she will be interrogated--"
    "Questioned," the other man corrected.
    "Questioned, yes.  Only questioned, nothing else.
 No beating, torture, or hot things shoved up her--"
   


XD
 

Can't you  just see this scene?  Something right out of a sitcom.  ^_^

 

    "Whenever the police deal with a gaijin, they always
 ask to see the gaijin's alien registration card first.
 And if they take a gaijin into custody, they hang on to
 the card to discourage the prisoner from escaping."  She
 paused to look at the solid door in front of her.  "These
 men didn't even ask about her card."
    "Do you suspect...," Aoi gasped as she gripped
 Kaoru's arm.
    "I don't know but I have a very bad feeling about
 this," Miyabi replied.
   


No kidding...

The Eternal Lost Lurker
www.lurkerdrome.com
 

Thanks, Lurk!  You're a treasure.

- GL



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