Please excuse the fact that I have not posted the actual story here. I've 
wanted to wait a while and get the impressions from a few people, as well as 
few chapters written before I posted this to the FFML. The reason why is so 
that I can make sure that the story gets rolling along properly, and at the 
same time isn't some horrendous piece of dreck that will be universally 
panned.

So, here's the situation.

I've gotten the first four chapters of the story up on FF.net for a Naruto / 
(mystery anime) story, and I wanted to ask you all (whomesoever is 
interested)  to take a look and give me your comments and criticisms for it, 
if you don't mind that is. C&C can be here... or in personal email or in a 
review on the FF.net website... whatever you like.

If you figure out  the anime that's the mystery.. yes.. it's the original 
series, and yes I know it sounds really strange... but it sorta makes sense 
if you think about it in connection with the Naruto setting.

It's a post chapter 280 (of naruto.. which is currently in issue 281 or 282 
now) story, and I'm really trying to stick to canon in it and to keep the 
characterizations spot on. So, any help that anyone could give me I'd much 
appreciate it.

The link to it is as follows.

www.fanfiction.net/s/2622421/1/

As I said, I haven't posted it here because I'd like to get a few people's 
impressions before I take the leap and post. I really respect the writing 
talents of the people on this list, and I'm dubious about my writing joining 
such an august body. Once I get some people's impressions, I'll probably 
post the whole thing here for serious disection if the critiques aren't too 
bad.

Also, a beta would be nice... so if after reading it you'd like to be my 
beta.. please contact me. The only thing I ask is that you read it first and 
give me a solid critique of your thoughts on the story.

Thanks people.




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