Fallacies wrote:

Seems fairly customary nowadays to kick off one of these epic 
fanfictions with a load of meaningless speculation about beginnings 
and ends and other concepts of the sort.
 

Even more of a custom is to actually give the name of the story 
somewhere.  Nowhere in your teaser is the actual title of the story 
mentioned.

The acronym "CTCD" is the story "Comes the Cold Dragon." by Don 
Granberry...isn't it...

Seriously, don't use an acronym without stating what it stands for.  
You'll notice "Magical Guardian Ranma" didn't become "MGR" until about 
the 5th chapter or so.

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