plan to pretend not to see her and lose her on the stairs.

I don't really see what is so wrong with what I wrote. It was a bit
arkward
perhaps. I ended up changing it to:

"Wait! wait!" she called out, dashing Ranma's plan of pretending
not to
have seen her and then loosing her on the stairs.7

"of" doesn't really work for me.  But if you like it...  

	Ahem.  "Losing," not "Loosing," either way.


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