Matthew Hanson wrote:
Joe Fenton already covered most of my criticisms in his review but he
missed this one.
Tenchi tends to go out of his way to keep the details about space and
his heritage a secret. He would never just tell a random guy about
it after they first met. Plus I believe there is some sort of law
against doing so in the OVA.
Yep - missed that one. I thought about that when
reading it, but forgot about it when I went back
through the reply. That's why it's good to have
multiple people look over your work. :)
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