hkmiller wrote:

DB Sommer wrote:

"It took you long enough to answer!" Tomo grumbled, though she kept right

on

hitting the doorbell until she finished the song.

Heh.

Tomo can be... thorough.

"That's going to be our new skylight," Osaka provided in explanation.

"I... see," Kagura said slowly.

"I should also mention that fireworks are more impressive when they're

shot

off outdoors," Osaka added.

Heh.

But it seemed like a potentially good idea at the time.

Tomo opened it and stuck her head in. "Cool, I've always wanted to slide
down one of these."

This is SO Tomo.

Yeah, I thought so too.

"Right, and then we'll visit Kaorin, since she misses us so much. I'll

bet

she even misses Kagura, who she never met."

I think in the manga (at least) Kaorin and Kagura overlapped in
Yukari-sensei's
class for the girls' junior year.  They should know each other, if not
particularly
well.

Hmm. I was thinking Kaorin went out when Kagura came in. At least in the
anime it was that way. I was going to go for all the volumes of manga at the
con, but they were sold out of every copy in the place by early Saturday.
0_0

Anyway, nice short.  It had some funny parts.

Thanks. Like I said, this was whipped up quick for the con, though I'd have
written it eventually in any case.

DB Sommer




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