Angus MacSpon wrote:

Hi Bob,

Masterful ending.  What else is there to say?
 

I'll second that.  In particular, I was hoping that Lisa would get to 
keep her senshi
powers.  (But I'll agree that we didn't need to see her using them 
again; I thought
that scene had just enough in it, and not a bit too much.)

Except that ... if that really was Chitty-chitty-bang-bang buzzing the
Genom tower at the end, then ... well, okay; but you still deserve a
spanking.  :)
 

Here I can't agree.  That scene put the biggest grin out of the entire 
epilogues on my
face, once I realized what it was they were doing.  You certainly set it 
up adequately;
we were told that Linna owned one of the four Chitty-chitty-bang-bangs, 
and we were
told that Doug had released gravtech into the public domain.  I just 
never put those
two facts together until a few paragraphs into this epilogue.

Thanks for creating this story.  And I'll look forward to seeing the
other steps in the Walk, if and when you write them ...
 

Yes.  Thank you VERY much for creating, and finishing, this story, and I 
wish
you the best in your future writing, whatever it might turn out to be.



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