Nidoking wrote on 3/10/2004, 9:26 PM:

 >
 > > >     With a joyous cry of "Panties!" Happosai launched himself at
 > > > Kasumi's exposed legs, rubbing his face in her most sensitive area.
 > > > Kasumi shrieked involuntarily and smacked him to the ground,
 > whereupon
 > > > she proceeded to stomp his head repeatedly with a firm heel.
 > >
 > > Like something out of the first episode of 'Golden Boy'
 >
 > This was the part I was really worried about when I envisioned the
 > story... what would Kasumi's reaction be to being victimized by
 > Happosai? I think I managed to do a pretty good job, though.

    Worked for me.  Some of the things that *made* it work were her 
"marriage" comment, and her quick reversion to type.  Getting Nabiki 
first helped kind of "ramp up" to this, too.  Very deft.

 > > Her voluptuous bottom swaying back and forth in a most tempting
 > manner.
 >
 > Doesn't it always? Not that I watch it that carefully or anything...

    How DARE you look at the lovely and innocent Kasumi that way!  She's 
MI-- oh, Tofu, I didn't see you standing there.  A-heh.  Heh."

 > > >     Ranma quickly backed away. "I wanted to get Shampoo and Ukyo
 > > > instead, but having those two too close to Akane could be
 > dangerous!"
 > >
 > > Yeah, they might go for Akane's breasts instead of Happi.
 >
 > No, that's the sequel, where Ranma learns the CLAMP-ken. ^_^

    <twitch>  I'm not sure which is more frightening -- the fact that you 
might actually write such a thing, or the fact that, if you do, I'll 
almost certainly read it....




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