cutting through some of the old backlog.


      That wasn't unusual. Happi would often leave Nerima for reasons

of his own. But when he did, the number of panty thefts in the
neighborhood would drop to zero. At the moment, panties were still
being stolen, but Happi was nowhere to be seen. Worrisome. Happi
NEVER stole panties without allowing himself to be seen doing it.
(The old pervert seemed to enjoy the commotion as much as he enjoyed
the panties.)

True

      "Forgive me, McGyver-sensei. I am the Kunoichi Konatsu."

      "I ... see. Forgive me for staring, Konatsu-san." Seamus waved
the pair to a table. "Kona Gold for me and the Runt, and what would
you have, Konatsu?"

Konatsu: Whiskey. A bottle.

      "Point taken, Lil. But the average member of the Foot could be
taken down by any one of us. Without breaking a sweat. In our sleep.
Even the Academia

Macadamia

 Nut could probably mow down half a dozen or so, and

do it before his morning tea."

      Sasuke snickered. "Academia nu

and here, unless you are chagning it

      Once Akane had led him to her home, Kasumi had struck with all
the speed and ruthlessness of a trained ninja.

Perhaps she will be courted by the Foot, then

      "I told you, you are _tourists_," he hissed. "Tourists do NOT
glare at the people around them as if they expect to be attacked
at any moment. You fools will make the police suspicious. You WILL
relax, or at least _pretend_ to. That is an ORDER. Otherwise,
you will be sent back to our master in disgrace!"

heh

      Fred blinked, looking from Happi over to the (small) battle
raging just yards away in the middle of the street. "Shouldn't
you be.. I don't know.. assisting your student or something along
those lines? He seems to be getting his butt kicked."

Happi: It'll build character

      "I have to make the putt!"

      "The what?"

      "And I'll need someone to open a manhole or something..."

Heh.

      The women cheered. One of them kissed Ryouga on the cheek. Which

cheek, which

      (Yes! I already have an arch enemy!)

I guess so.


nice work. Flowed real well and I didn't see any grammar errors other than
the ones I listed.

DB Sommer



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