Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma][Rewrite] Trials of Destiny: Prologue
From: Denise Cameron
Date: 2/11/2004, 7:13 PM
To: Kyle Emmerson , ffml@anifics.com











Prologue: The Dawning

"A man's true strength lies not within the size of his body, but the size
of
his heart. Not by his skillful movement, but by the knowledge trapped
within
his mind. Not by the might of those who would stand with him, but by the
trust he places in them."
- Chang Xi; The Book of Millennia


- Nice opening quote.

Rogi bounced in absolute excitement. The motion was almost childish-- but
there was nothing childish about Rogi. "How exciting," he said. "To have
you, their leader, the Ohmikami herself shouting idle threats so seriously

- Ohmikami? Sort of like, Oh my God?

"I name this valley, the Valley of the Sacred Springs! I name this valley,
Jusenkyo! May all who travel here experience the wonder! May all who
travel
here remember the place always!"


- Well, I was not expecting that :-) Interesting.

----

Author's Notes:

Yeah, I'm planning on rewriting this one. I took it in a direction I
wasn't
prepared to handle, (Too many characters) and there was no way I could
have
dealt with it. I will be keeping a few choice characters, but I'll be
taking
out some of the extra, unneeded ones.

- You had a good start, and I'd like to see what you have planned for this.
:-)

- Denise


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