Subject: [FFML] Re: [Tenchi][Dark][Lime]Dark Love (shortfic)
From: elisteran
Date: 2/1/2004, 7:31 PM
To: ffml@anifics.com


Papa 51 <papa_51_productions@yahoo.com> writes:

 Dark Love

	In my life, there are many women who say they love
me.  They chase after me, fight over me and fight for
me.  Many men believe it would be heaven to have so
many stunning and powerful women trying to woo them. 
They are wrong though, for they have no concept of

I think  wrong, though,

Is 'have no concept' the best phrasing? Perhaps 'they do not
understand true love'.

true love.

	When I think of love, I think of dark, fragrant
nights in the parks.  Moonlit walks with frail,
beautiful women who should know better than to walk
alone with so many crazy people out and about.  Quiet
time alone, just her and I, no others to be seen or be
seen by.

	Alas, love is not all fun and games.  After admiring
a woman�s body from afar, you must walk up and talk to

Your single quotes are not ASCII

her.  You must get to know her, making sure she is
single, alone and weak.  This is where all of my would
be lovers fail.

would-be 

 They are all very strong women.  I
can�t express true love with any of them.  I must
avoid them to find the women I can truly love.

 	When you have decided that she is worthy of your
love, you must make your move.  Pulling the garrote of
piano wire from your back pocket, you must reach up
and grab her head, avoiding the kick she will surely
direct at the confluence of your anatomy.

That seems a little too specific. (Always exactly one kick?)

 You must
wrap the wire around her neck once and pull, forcing
her to the ground.

	She will struggle, she MUST struggle for it to be
truly beautiful.  You must kneel on her chest and pull
a little harder as she spasms beneath you.  How can
you deny the pure pleasure felt at the consummation of
you love for a woman?

your love

I enjoyed it; a good short little diversion. 
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