Subject: [FFML] Re: [oneshot][PoT] Switcheroo
From: "DB Sommer" <sommer@3rdm.net>
Date: 1/18/2004, 12:07 PM
To: "Aishuu Shadowweaver" <mbsilvana@yahoo.com>, <quicksilver@yahoogroups.com>, <ffml@anifics.com>


Prince of Tennis? Can't say I've seen that one. Have been watching Hikaru No
Go, though. Damn odd how a show revolving around a board game is
interesting.



Uncharacteristically, Yagyuu couldn?t remember who had
originated the idea.

'originated' here, seem awkward. 'came up with' sounds more natural.

 It seemed to him that it was a
mutual decision, to become the other, but one of them
would have had to bring it up first. He guessed that
it was Niou, since it was his type of plan, but there
was a practicality and long-range planning to it that
was more his style.

They probably merged the ideas, then. :)


It didn?t

odd program character here.


It took place in school, and only for around fifteen
minutes. Niou simply swiped Yagyuu?s glasses,
rearranged his hair, and helped Yagyuu style his own
usually-neat locks into a wild look that made him feel
like he was someone else - and he was, almost.

But not quite.


He'd need another personality for that. :)

 mistaken for Niou. Niou liked keeping people confused,
and as his partner, Yagyuu knew it was wise to
facilitate any plans the other boy had.

Still, it was odd to walk around without his glasses,
looking at the world through slightly out-of-focused

through a

Still. There were things they needed to work on until
the switch was complete, and Yagyuu, ever the
perfectionist, understood this. Their tennis styles
were different, and it took a while, and a lot of
trust, for him to give up his Laser Beam to anyone,
but it was Niou who pointed out that even if he
learned it, it would never be the same. All players
were different, and it took more than training to
truly master a shot.

Yep.



Yagyuu, if he had been the type, would have rolled his
eyes.

It's a fair question. Some people love acting like someone else.




Note: Yes, I am aware this will probably be out of
date by chapter 206. Yes, I know Yukimura is captain -
but the incident referred to was in the second year,
so Yukimura was vice captain, as Tezuka was in his
second year.

Interesting character study on the switching. Nice work.

DB Sommer





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