Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic][R.5/DGC] Ranma the Patryn Chapter 4
From: "Druid" <druid@ispwest.com>
Date: 12/19/2003, 4:10 AM
To: "FFML" <ffml@anifics.com>, "Wanderer D" <wandererd@yahoo.com>


She had thought he would be weaker after his lair had been brought
down, and she had thought he would be easy pray. She had come in the

would be easy <prey>

dead of the night, looking for him, and attacking him while he pretended
to be asleep.

When she discovered that he was neither asleep nor week she had scrambled

neither asleep nor <weak>

Blood Dragon essence was left. A red mist emerged from the remains of the
dragon, and seeped into him. When it was over, there was nothing more
than a squeleton left, and all the knowledge that she had was now his

than a <skeleton>


   Loved both chapters, but the end... is more than a little weird on this
one. I though Bond was Gandalf at first. :)

--
Druid
druid@ispwest.com



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