Suggested changes: {before : after}
On Sat, 02 Aug 2003 05:57:17 -0400 Sean Danna <carrotglace@mindspring.com> wrote:
I found myself wondering why it took me so damn long to realize it. I
really should have figured it out a lot sooner.
Me too. It seemed pretty obvious from the start. ;}b
As Usagi Tsukino landed behind me, with a much heavier sounding thump
than a fourteen-year old girl should be able to generate. I didn't have
much time to be introspective. I knew I was looking at Carnage, and I
was Spiderman, with Venom backing me up.
Well, she's right behind you at least.
"We need to leave, now. There is a way you {: can} contact the others?" Mai,
her guardian shinobi, had simply strolled into her room and announced
her business.
"Someone watches us{: ,} girl. This is not some perverted teen either. I've
only caught glimpses of him, but three times in one night is a bit much
for coincidence. We need to go, or your life, and the lives of your
family could very well end tonight. Do you understand that?"
Mai growled under her breath. "Hurry up. I don't plan to travel through
the streets girl. You're not strong enough without those powers of
yours. I learned that much just by watching you."
Apparently she's smarter than she sounded in the previous part.
She hung her head and rose into the sky. "I'm starting to realize why
that Spiderman guy is so pissed off all the time."
Which probably won't make her any friendlier to him.
"Lesbians," he grumbled as he ignored her ranting and walked closer to
the battle.
I'd think he'd approve, since they are not normally chasing him.
The man was thrown back as an arc of fire {shot :} ripped across his chest.
He fumbled back to the ground and stared at his ruined uniform for a
moment. Calmly he stood up and dusted off his sleeves. His chest was now
exposed, but unharmed. "This isn't over worm. Perhaps I underestimated
you a little bit this time, but I won't make the same mistake again."
"It is not wise, to pick such an obvious meeting place, nor is it wise
to take such an obvious route," said Kunzite as he stepped out of the
shadows in front of him. He was {eyeing : eying} them both coldly and had his
hands behind his back.