"Bryan Truskolaski" <truk77@hotmail.com> wrote:
But Highpoints had one other thing going for it; the
d�cor. Almost every square inch of the bar�s walls was
were
"Was" is correct. The subject of the sentence is "inch", not "walls".
"Walls" is the object of a prepositional phrase.
The posters and the films they promoted were often the
topic of lengthy discussions among the bar�s patrons.
Which was entirely the point. To keep the conversation
fresh and the customers coming back the posters were
coming, back
coming back, the
"Naru told me that Keitaro found me so wasted I could
barely walk and he had to half drag half carry me
home."
Ok, I think there is supposed to be something on the
'half drag half carry" part but I'm not sure what. Is it a
comma, a hyphen, or am i just crazy?
Both! I'd prefer "half-drag, half-carry".
The blue haired girl rested her elbows up on the table
and lazily let her face rest in her hands. "Yeah,
you�re right. I guess I�m no one to talk. Yusuke�s
really happy and the girl he�s engaged to is very
nice. I should just accept the fact that I was never
anything more than an employee to Yusuke and try and
be happy for them but�"
them, but. It can't be just me, can it?
In some of these cases the comma can be optional. Like in between "cases"
and "the" in the previous sentence.
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