Subject: [FFML] My Own AMG Lemon Repost, Revised
From: "marcussturm" <marcussturm@prodigy.net>
Date: 4/20/2003, 8:24 PM
To: "FFML" <ffml@anifics.com>

To all the other anime fans out there, Hello!

I've enjoyed reading the many fan fictions on the net, and although not a writer myself, I like to posit possible alternitives to some of the happenings in the stories, somewhat in the manner of Gregg's bet series.

As I just said, I'm not a writer, so what I do is in the nature of writing outlines with the occasionial bit of dialogue to flesh it out, that way I can follow a storyline, but still add or change the thoughts and words spoken as I like.

This will be my first and possibly only post to the net, and the reason I'm posting it is that I read an AMG/City Hunter crossover where Belldandy grants a wish where she almost has to become the wisher's lover.

This struck me because I have what would be called an AMG Divergance story where that is Keichii's wish, and more.

DISCLAIMER: Ah! My Goddess and all characters are not my property, I'm just borrowing them for a while, and will give them back when I'm through with them only slightly used, so please don't sue me, because like all the rest of the posters, I have no money. Also, if anyone wants to take over this story because they think it has possibilities, in part or with variations, you have my permission.


By the way, in case you didn't know from the above, this is supposed to be a lemon, so if your'e under 18, don't read it. If I was to categorize this, it would be MC, NC, INC. 


AN ALTERNATE WISH

Prelude

In this universe, just before Belldandy was going to answer a phone call and give Keichi a wish, an outbreak of an especially pernicious and sneaky type of bug hit Yggsdrill, taking weeks to clear out.

Belldandy was anticipating answering Keichii's phone call when she was summoned to help fight the massive influx of bugs. Promising herself that it was only a delay, she left the Goddess Relief Office unattended, unaware that as she left, a bug was invading the Yaggsdrill access port in the room and going dormant.

When they were finally under control, Belldandy had the chance to go to earth and be with Keichi. So anxious was she to go that she took the first chance offered without updating herself on his file, which was a very big mistake.

It was a mistake because in those extra weeks, Keichi learned lessons on life and love compleatly different from those learned in the original story.

Chapter 1

Keichi was with his two Sempai, getting drunk and watching what they called "Training films."

Talking about what happened that afternoon at the races, he told them, "I can't believe I lost out to him like that, he's such an asshole."

He was replied to "Well he's rich, he can wave it round to get what he wants."

"But the only reason I lost to him was because I didn't want to go too fast, I wanted to be sure."

"Well now you know better, next time don't hesatate, go for it right away and don't give them a chance!"

"Yeah, don't give a dame a chance ta refuse ya, don't give 'em an excuse ta say no."

Being drunk, this seemed reasonable to Keichii so he told them, "Alright, the next time I have a chance, I'll do it, I'll make sure any female I can make my lover can't say no!"

"That's the way, but we have to go to the next set of races, and because of your troubles, you stay here to look out for the dorm, and we'll see you Sunday evening. While we're gone, don't forget to study those films so you will know what to do the next time you have a chance."

On that cheery note they left, leaving Keichii to continue to drink and watch films. This continued until he noticed that he was out of booze, whereupon he went to the phone to order some more.

This was what Belldandy was waiting for, so she intercepted the call and told him, "This is the Goddess Relief Line, one moment and someone will be with you for a consultation."

Leaving him staring at the reciever in confusion, and before he even had a chance to hang up, the mirror in the hallway started glowing and a girl in ornate robes with markings on her cheeks and forehead stepped out of it. She was slightly taller than he, with hair flowing down her back to the floor.

Such was his surprise that it was only after she'd finished that he realized that the female had been speaking.

On being asked to repeat herself, Belldandy lost her smile for a moment to a concerned gaze, and stated, "Hello, my name is Belldandy, I'm with the Goddess Relief Office. We give wishes to deserving mortals, and you've been selected to receive one."

With an alcohol-induced acceptance, Keichii asked, "What can I wish for?"


She answered, "Money, power , a girlfriend, or anything else except the destruction of the planet."

He was struck by her mention of a girlfriend, and because she was reading his thoughts, when she heard him think, "Gosh she's pretty, I wonder what it would be like if _she_ was my girlfriend," Belldandy felt that everything was going to work out.

Just when she was getting ready to hear him make that his wish, she was disturbed to hear his next thought be, "No, remember what you promised, this your chance to do it big time!"

After hearing that thought, she was shocked to hear Keichii say, "Ok, I wish that I forever had the power to make all the females I want, (with a hard look at her), no matter who they are or how they feel about me, become my totally loyal, absolutley obediant lovers who will do anything I tell them to make me happy, up to and including cheerfully bearing my babies, and I want you to be my first lover."

Before she could recover, she felt the marking on her brow swell with power and launch a beam of light to the heavens. When it returned to her, she was even more surprised to hear her voice saying, "Wish approved."

Shaking off the shock, she located the phone and called Kami-Sama. He told her that a dormant bug in the wish approval program became active when Keichii made his wish, and made it the highest priority approval possible, protected by the full rescources of the Ultimate Power so that to reverse it would take shutting Yaggdsrill down permanately.

Although impossible to alter, He would place such a security rating on the wish that no one would be able to find out what happened to her unless she told them, and he would be doing his best to find some way to correct it. 

After she hung up the phone, Belldandy turned around to see Keichii staring drunkenly at her.

"Well, does my wish hold?" He asked.

"I'm afraid it does," she answered, "You now have the power you wished for."

Keichii had been thinking while she was on the phone about what he could do with his power. "Well then I want you to stay with me forever, protecting me and my interests with your full power. Now take those clothes off, slowly, and display yourself to me so that I can see what kind of lover I"m getting."

Even as Belldandy asked, "Keichii please don't do this, it's not what I want," she realized that her hands were already undoing her outer robe. When that was in a puddle at her feet, her hands went on to undo the ties of of her dress.

Those actions distracted her so much that she almost missed hearing him telling her, "Well I want it, which means that you have to want it too."

And, just like that, she knows that she has to strip naked for Keiichi. Mindful of his command to go slowly, instead of vanishing her clothes by magic, she actively takes control of undressing herself. Dropping her dress on her robe, she stands there in just her slip, slippers and stockings. 

When she shimmied out of her slip, it revealed that Belldandy didn't wear underwear.

Even though she was blushing wildly from her nudity, the next part of his command, to display herself, had her walking over to a small table and, placing her right foot on it, showing off her cunt and the down that covered it. 

As she leaned forwrd to unbuckle her slipper and remove her stocking, her firm young breasts swung forward and back with her movements, stoking Keichii's drunken lust, that the sight of her stripping had risen in him.

Finished with her right foot, she replaced it with her left, moving so that her back is to him. When she bends over to remove the slipper and stocking on that foot, her ass cheeks spread open, giving him a view of her asshole and her cunt from the rear.

This was Keichiis' first sight of real naked female flesh, giving him an erection he would never have believed he could attain.

When she was finished and had turned to face him, an excited Keiichi told Beldandy, "Come here and take _my_ clothes off now."

The feel of her hands on his body, the sight of her naked flesh swaying as she kneeled before him as she removed his briefs, and the sound of her breath catching as she reveals his maleness, all rouses as nothing in his life had ever done before.


Combined with his igniting libido, it caused him to grab hold of Belldandy and drag her to his room, where he threw her roughly onto his bed and, with no effort to get her ready, tried to jam his painfully hard cock into Belldandys' unready opening.


Being as this was his first try at fucking, it's no surprise that he failed to achieve his objective, as he didn't quite know where it went.

Getting frustrated from this, Keichii told the weakly protesting and crying girl under him, "Don't just lie there, help me to put it in!"

Being told to help, Belldandy had no choice but to do her best, and spreading her legs to the outside of Keichii's, she stretched her arms down to where he was straining to penetrate. Her left hand spread her outer lips, while her right hand grabbed his shaft and guided him to her opening.

Feeling her hand on his dick just about drove Keichii wild, and when the tip of his shaft pressed against warm flesh, and her voice came saying, "It goes in here," he shoved into her with all his strength, sinking into her tight tunnel after a brief obstruction was overcome.

Ignoring the cries of pain this action brought from Belldandy, he began to plunge wildly into and out of her body, overwhelmed by the sensations he was experiencing for the first time.

Something that Keichii didn't know about alcohol was that while it may have lowered his inhibitions so that he didn't hesitate to have sex, it could also delay his climax.

Getting tired of pumping to no result, Keichii pulled out and lay down beside Belldandy, and told her, "Do me with your mouth."

At first, she didn't know what he meant. When she did, she protested, "But I don't know what to do!", just before being compelled to engulf the head of his member with her inexpert lips. She just held it there, crying quietly.

Flashing back to the movies, Keichii began to talk Belldandy through their first blow-job. He taught her how to cup his balls in both hands, how to lick and suck them tenderly, one at a time.

He then had her lick up and down the length of his cock, and when that proved enjoyable, hissed at her, "Yes, keep doing that!"

The attention Belldandy was paying to him was bringing about his waited-for orgasm. When he felt himself close to releasing, Keichii shouted, "Now put your mouth on my tip and pump my shaft with both your hands!"

When she followed that order, the sensations induced in his dick brought him closer than ever to cumming. The feel of her hands as they went up and down, the warmth of her lips wrapped over his tip, her tongue occasionally tickling with a brief flutter of motion, finally pushed him over the edge.

Grabbing her hair with both hands, Keichii forced Belldandy to take his entire length down her throat, not stopping until her nose was mashed into his pubic hair.

When he felt his come begin to shoot, he exclaimed, ""Yes!, Yes!, Take it all, swallow every single drop!"

He then shot jet after jet of spunk, and the feel of Belldandy's throat spasaming down his length as she swallowed only made his next shot seem to come harder than the one before.

He finally came to an end, and calmed down enough to realize that Belldandy was both choking and crying.

A vestige of his normal self surfacing, Keichii pulled her up until she was spread full-length against him.

Wrapping his arms around Belldandy, he pushed her hair out of her eyes and tried to soothe her by running his hands down her body, as if he was petting a cat. While he did that, Keichii was also whispering into Belldandys' ear, "There, there, it's all right. You did very good, and I know you'll get better with practice."

As Keichii was handing out this somewhat alarming praise, his hands, seemingly independent of his concious mind, were roving over Belldandy's breasts, weighing them in his palms and tweaking their nipples.

As they both calmed down, they became aware of what Keichii's hands were doing at the same time.

Keichii prevented Belldandy from moving away in embarrassement, fascinated as he was by the tactile sensations he was discovering.

With his first passions slaked, he was finding he liked touching her body, something he'd neglected to do in his rush to couple earlier.

Calmer, Keichii commenced to explore the delightful feminine vistas laid before him, bringing her lips to his, and trying out how it felt to French kiss. Finding it enjoyable, he commenced to kiss his way down Belldandys' beautifully slender body, kissing down her neck, stopping to nibble on her nipples, laving the sting with his tongue when Belldandy caught her breath from the sensation.

Belldandy herself was having conflicting feelings. First was her violated flesh protesting the use it was just put through. Overlying that, though, and gaining force, was it's response to Keichii's now-gentle ministrations.

To her mortification, she found that his stroking, kissing, and licking were first soothing, then rousing her passions. So much so that when his tongue moved from probing her bellybutton to the junction of her legs, she unconciously spread them open to give Keichii better access to her cunt.

She only noticed this when he licked her outer lips, startling her out of her own thoughts with the realization that Keichii hadn't needed to force access, but that she'd done it on her own.

This thought held her spellbound until he pushed his tongue through her outer lips and into the center of her tunnel.

The feelings this produced surprised a gasp out of her, one that was noticeably lacking in pain. The gasp turned into a purr of pleasure as, upon hearing a favorable response to his action, Keichii went at his self-imposed task with growing enthusiasm. 

Keichii varied his approach to her cunt according to the responses Belldandy made to his actions. When he happened to lick a little nub protruding from the top of her slit and she caught her breath and then moaned, he figured he must have found her clit.

This was confirmed when Belldandy exclaimed, "Ohh.Keichii, what did you do?", and lifted her hips to keep them in contact with his lips when he looked up at her.

The look of almost painful pleasure on her face encouraged him to attack that little nub with renewed enthusiasm.

The reward Keichii received was two hands that pushed his head harder against her flesh, and an increase of her moaning.

Just as his jaws and tongue were getting too tired to continue, Belldandy suddenly arched her back off the bed and froze like that, leaving only her head, shoulders, and feet still on the mattress.

Recognizing her action as being on a par with his own when he'd climaxed, Keichii was still surprised when a gush of sweet-tasting fluid flowed from Belldandy's cunt and into his mouth. 

Gulping, he swallowed every drop, and the action of his mouth on her cunt had the result of prolonging her orgasm, so much so that when she did finally come down from the crest, Belldandy was too weary to move. 

She collapsed back down, wondering how she could go from being in pain to the heights of an ecstacy she had never dreamed of before.

Unfortunately for her, hearing and seeing Belldandy responding to his ministrations had gotten Keichii hard again.

After Belldandy weakly obeyed his command to, "Roll over and get up on your hands and knees.," he slipped his now more experienced cock into her pussy from the rear.

Being opened from his first entrance, and now liberally lubricated with her own juices, there was no difficulty in sheathing himself to the hilt.

Despite being tired, and a small twinge of remembered pain, Beldandy found that this time her body was responding favorably to having Keichii's cock stroking in and out, especially when he reached under and cupped her breasts with his hands.

This position, while enjoyable for him, left Keichii with poor control. One of his out-strokes went too far and he came all the way out.

When he automatically plunged forward again, his cock encountered a tighter hole than the one he'd just exited from, and, not paying any attention to Belldandys' efforts to move away, his grip on her breasts tightened and he used them as handles to pull her body back against his invading member as he pressed inward.

The combination of the two pressures, as well as the liquid coating him, allowed Keichii to fully enter her ass-hole with less pain and effort than it took to rend the virginity of her cunt.

Belldandy was more uncomfortable and shamed than in pain, and when Keichii removed a hand from a breast and slid it into her cunt and flicked her clit with his thumb, the discomfort started to pass away, and pleasure began to replace it.

When Keichii heard her give out a long, low-voiced, "Ohhh.," he stopped moving and told her, "Belldandy, I want you to do the work this time."

Blushing furiously, and absently noting that was the first time Keichii had called her by name, she became more enthusiastic as time went on, as she pushed herself onto his staff, then pulled away from him over and over.

With Keichii manipulating her clit with one hand, and the other moved to plunge into her cunt with her thrusts, Belldandy worked herself to an orgasm that rivaled the first one he'd given her.

Feeling her ass muscles squeezing onto him caused Keichii to come as well, so hard that it was almost as painful as it was pleasurable.

This last exertion finally wore Keichii out, and he collapsed over her back.

Rolling him to the side and off her, she asked through her tears, 'Keichii...Keichii, what happened to you to make you like this?"

Using her mindreading powers, this is what she discovered.

FLASHBACK:

When Belldandy went to hunt Bugs, down on earth, Keichii succeeded in reaching an all-night delivery place and was able to make an order for some food, wondering as he hung up why he felt he should have reached someone else.

Time moves at different rates between Heaven and Earth if no one is paying attention, so while only a few days went by for Belldandy, weeks passed for Keichii.

During that time, Keichii's school Auto Club won a series of races against a rival school, bringing him to the attention of Sayoko Mishima, who thought to use him to get the attention of the Captain of the rival team, her cousin Aoshima, whom she had a crush on.

In pursuit of that goal, she contrived to be introduced to Keichii, and after awhile they began to date.

During this time, Sayoko began to come to appreciate Keichii for himself, and after one particularly hard-fought race she thought to reward him with herself. She asked him to meet at her place to celebrate, and when she answered his knock, met him at the door dressed in a see-through negligee and skimpy bikini panties.

Unfortunately, while Keichii was attracted to her, all he did was to stutter and dither, still being easily embarrased. His attempts to refuse her gracefully were pathetic, only succeding in getting Sayoko angry, making her think she wasn't good enough for him. She was so angry that she couldn't even speak except to whisper harshly, "Get out!"

Keichii left, and over the next few days, whenever the two ran into each other and Keichii tried to apologize, Sayoko just snubbed him and turned away.

When the next race weekend came around, he noticed her hanging around Aoshima, the rival teams' captain.

For some reason this made him feel jealous, and so he drove like he'd never driven before, being more aggressive and taking chances that seemed insane.

The new tactics paid off, and he won the race by a full two laps.

When Keichii saw Sayoko approaching him in the winners' circle, he thought she was going to congratulate him.

Imagine his surprise when instead she said, "You know, I once thought you might be an interesting male, but all you can show passion for is cold metal. When a warm female tries to get close to you, all you can do is choke and stutter. If this is the way you're going to act, you'll never get a female to take you seriously. Even more, I bet no female would want to have your babies for fear they'll grow up to be like you.

"As for me, I'm going to console Aoshima. He might not win races like you, but he knows how to handle a female, something I don't think you'll ever learn."

After delivering this diatribe, said in full hearing of his teammates and the race officials, Sayoko turned around and flounced over to where Ashoma was looking at her with gratitude.

This totally unexpected attack stunned Keichii, and made everyone else wildly curious, but his two sensi, Aoyama-sempai and Tamiya-sempai, told the others to pack up and go to the next town on the race schedule.

While the others followed orders, they took Keichii back to the dorm. Observing him to still be in shock, they poured him a shot of saki and ordered him to explain what it was all about.

Slowly, hesitantly, with many sips of saki to give himself courage, Keichii told about going out with Sayoko Mishima, and what a mess he'd made when she offered to make love to him.

After staring at him pityingly, Aoyama-sempai and Tamiya-sempai looked at each other and said together, "Bring out the instruction material!"

What they did next was to retrieve some video tapes from their rooms and set Keichii down in front of the TV, Aoyama-sempai saying, "You need to know how to handle yourself with females, and these tapes will show you just what to do."

"Yeah," Tamiya-sempai affirmed, "Yuh need ta know how ta handle a broad. Ya need ta take control of wimmin, or else they'll walk all over ya."

With no further warning than that, they proceeded to show Keichii some movies that he never ever imagined seeing.

With titles such as "Deepthroat, Taboo, Hypnotic Sensations, The Virgin, and Caligula," they introduced him to such a blaze of sex education as he never knew existed.

During the entire eight-hour marathon, Aoyama-sempai and Tamiya-sempai were giving comments on technique and the best way to control a female with sex.

Being by this time totally stunned by this viewing materiel, and more than a little buzzed by all the alcohol he'd imbibed, Keichii burst out, (after conveniently forgetting that he's the one who'd chickened out), "Alright, the next time I have a chance to take a female I will, and not give her a chance to refuse me!"

"That's tha way ta go," enthused Tamiya-sempai.

"Right, you stay here and recover," affirmed Aoyama-sempai, "We'll be back Monday morning."

With that, the two left Keichii alone with his thoughts, which were highly colored by the movies which he started viewing over again, imagining what he'd do to a female if he got his hands on one again. It certainly wouldn't be to let her go!

In time, after further watching and drinking, he discovered he was hungry. Going to the phone, he tried to recall the number of the all-night delivery place, but in his inebriated condition, he made some wrong choices.

That was where Belldandy entered the picture.

After reviewing what led up to today, Belldandy thought sorrowfully to to herself, "If only I had taken the time to update myself on his file, I could have waited until Keichii had sobered up and gotten over that nasty girl."

Looking more kindly at the sleeping boy, she whispers,"I forgive you Keichii. I just hope we find some way to fix this." Snuggling up to Keichii, Belldandy goes to sleep herself.

Chapter 2


When Keichii wakes up the next morning, he has a massive hangover headache, and a very hazy memory of the last night.

He gets up and goes to the bathroom to get some asprin, then goes to the into the den, where he sits in front of the T.V. and trys to figure out what had gone on last night.

While thinking, Keichii noticed the the VCR light was still blinking on and off. Wondering what's on, he uses the remote to turn it on, to discover that Taboo was still in. He was watching it again when a leg started coming out of the T.V..

The leg was followed by the body of a dusky-skinned, silver-haired female who stood in front of him and looked around the room.

Following the legs came the hips, torso, breasts, arms and head of an exotically beautiful female, dressed in a figure-hugging dress with a slit up one side, reaching far enough up that it was apparent that she wasn't wearing underwear.

Her silver hair set off her dusky skin, with three symbols on her cheeks and forehead that somehow looked familiar; and the indolent pose she took, with one bare hip cocked towards him would have totally flustered Keichii before last night.

As it was, her entrance only called to mind memories of someone else showing up in a like manner.

Unused to having her entrances be mostly ignored, the woman turned to Keichii and complained, "Finally, I was beginning to think that you were never going to turn on the TV," and, grabbing the remote from him, with a sidelong glance at what was showing, continued, "Not that I approve of your viewing material," she turned it off.

After giving him a good view of her, the strange female crossed her arms under her ample breasts (giving him a better view of her impressive cleavage), tapped her left foot impatiently, and harrumphed, "Well, where is she?"

Still coming to terms with the thought that the night before must have really happened, Keichii could only stammer out, "Where is who? For that matter, who are you, and how did you do that?"

Giving him an annoyed look, she told him, "My name is Urd, and I'm a Goddess. That's how I did that. I'm looking for my sister Belldandy. I know she came to grant you a wish last night, it's all she could talk of for days. The problem is she didn't come back yesterday, and I want to know where she is."

With memories rushing back, and the hangover making him less than tactful, Keichii blurted out, "Then it did happen, I made love to a Goddess last night."

This answer wasn't what Urd wanted to hear, and she charged up to him. Towering over him she demanded, "What did you just say?"

Still not quite realizing what he's saying or who he's saying it to, Keishii expanded on what he'd just said. 

"I made love to Belldandy all last night, and I think she's the one cleaning up in the kitchen."

This unexpected answer brought Urd to a flummoxed halt. She inspected Keichii, and seeing only a short, unassuming youth, she came back with, "I know Bell likes you for some reason, but no way could a little boy like you get her into bed on your first meeting. It would take, oh, a miracle to get that to happen."

Beginning to get annoyed at this insulting female, Keichii's psyche, which had been slowly healing while he slept, started to fracture again.

He hadn't quite reached last night's heights, however, so only answered vulgarly, "My wish made her my lover, and I fucked her all night long, in her cunt, mouth, and in her ass. As the place is cleaner than when I went to bed, I assume she's still here."

This answer, containing as it did information about her sister she didn't want to hear, angered Urd so much that she seized Keichii by the front of his shirt and angrily declaimed, "Now I know you're lying you little twerp. Wishes don't work that way! Where is Belldandy!?"

This action by Urd was unfortunate, in that it finished breaking Keichii's fragile hold on his sanity. This time it would be longer in returning, as shock followed shock and he had no buffer between them.

As a result, Urd got an unpleasant surprise when he grabbed her wrist, twisted it to make her let go, then threw her away from him.

Before she could respond to this affront, Keichii yelled, "Belldandy, come here at once."

There came the sound of dishes crashing in another room, then the sound of bare feet running to the door of the room where the two were.

What neither of them was expecting to burst through that doorway, though, was a red-cheeked, breathless, totally naked Belldandy.

Before either could regain their wits, Belldandy was saying, "Yes, Keichii..?"

Looking past him, she stopped speaking with a gasp as she saw who else was in the room.

Looking mortified, she tried to hide her charms with her hands as Keichii became able to ask her, "Belldandy, why aren't you wearing any clothes?"

"Because you told me to take my clothes off last night, and didn't tell me I could put any back on."

Reminded of what his wish had consisted of, Keichii started to smile a very evil, lecherous smile as he told Belldandy, "Your sister here doesn't believe I fucked you. I want you to tell her everything we did last night in bed, and don't leave anything out."

As a blushing Belldandy tells Urd what the two of them had done, he began to imagine what he could do with two Goddesses as his lovers, especially as they were sisters. The very thought begins to get him hard.

Urd was becoming more and more shocked as she was informed of her sisters' night of passion. She couldn't believe her prim, oh-so proper sister could participate in the actions she was describing, much less within such a short time of meeting someone.

Interrupting the recital, she turned to Keichii and demanded of him, "What did you do to her?"

Noticing that Belldandy was describing how she had rubbed her nipples on the blanket, Urd glared at him and WILLED him to give her an answer that made sense.

Giving Urd a smirk, Keichii answered, "I told you, my wish made her my lover, and she'll be my lover forever. If you're not careful, you could find yourself being my lover too."

This statement exhausted Urd's not very great store of patience, and she started to charge up a power ball while saying, "Mortals are not supposed to have control of the Gods, so you had better undo whatever it was you did to my sister or suffer an eternity of hurt."

To her shock, the sister she was trying to protect was suddenly at her side, canceling her spell, and placing her in bindings that negated Urd's own powers.

This betrayal by her sister just about broke Urd's heart, and she almost didn't pay attention to what Keichii was saying.

"If you're wondering why she did that, part of my wish made Belldandy totally loyal to me, as well as needing to make me happy. I bet that whatever you were going to do would not have made me happy."

Urd quit staring at Belldandy and turned to him, not understanding what kind of wish could do that to a Goddess.

Taking a little pity on the bewildered Goddess before him, Keichii spread out his right arm and said to Belldandy, "Come here."

When she'd nestled into his arm, Keichii started running his hand up and down her body, playing with her breasts, tweaking her nipples, and twirling her pubic hair around a finger. From there he proceeded to insert his fingers into her cunt.

While Belldandy had a full-body blush because of the liberties being taken with her before her sister, she didn't try to protest or resist in any way. If anything, she leaned into his hand, visibly becoming aroused, with moisture seeping out of her cunt.

Looking at Urd during this process, Keichii had to laugh at the bulging eyes and total disbelief written on her face.

Pulling Belldandy in front of him so he could explore her body with both hands, he told her, "Tell your sister what my wish was, and why I have this power over you."

As she began to tell Urd about Keichii's wish, he dropped his shorts and guided his now hard cock into her from behind.

The feel of him entering her made Belldandy falter in her tale, but she shakily continued to tell her story, even as it became harder to think with his shaft stroking into her box.

By the time she got to the bug, and how it had affected the wish, her voice was an unintelligable gabble, and she was at the point of no return.

She felt Keichii's cock swelling inside her, and then blast jet after jet of come into her womb. This brought her over the edge and she joined him in bliss.

Seeing her sister get fucked to orgasm by this strange mortal before her eyes convinced Urd that Keichii had been telling the truth, and from what she could understand of what Belldandy told about it, it would affect any females, which meant Goddesses as well. The proof had just been graphically demonstrated to her by the two coming down from their orgasmic high.

Coming to that conclusion, she started to worry about herself as well as her sister. If Keichii's power could affect Belldandy to such an extent there was no reason to assume it couldn't do the same to her.

Having come to this conclusion, and trying to think of what she could do to get away, she was sidetracked by the satisfied voice of Keichii as he finished giving a long, slow French kiss to the female in his arms and asked, "Well Belldandy, what should we do with your sister here to keep her from causing us trouble?"

With an unhappy look on her face, and hesitation in her voice, Belldandy answered him with, "The only thing I can think of is for you to make her your lover also. I know how stubborn she gets, and Urd will keep trying to interfere until she does something that could get us all hurt."

Giving her a strong hug, Keichii tells them both, "I'm glad you agree with my own thought. I was just visualizing the two of you making love to each other as I watched. It made me so hot I just had to fuck you Belldandy. I can't wait for you to do it for real."

With these disturbing words, he turned to Urd and told her, "I want you to be my lover, and to stay with me forever."

When Urd heard Belldandy and Keichii discussing what to do with her, she'd started frantically trying to get out of her bonds. His response caused her to try even harder.

She hadn't made any headway when his sentence registered on her.

To her surprise, she instantly lost the power to leave. In fact, she found herself never wanting to leave Keichii or make him unhappy in any way.

In dawning comprehension, Urd realized that this was what had happened to her sister. With this thought, she lost any thoughts of betrayal towards Belldandy.

Seeing Urd relax, Keichii told Belldandy, "I think you can release Urd now."

When the bonds holding her vanished, he told Urd, "I think it's time to apologize for the way you've acted, Urd. You can start by coming here and giving Belldandy a hug and the best, most sensual, arousing kiss you can give. As a matter of fact, I want you two ladies to put on a show for me and make love to each other. Don't stop until you've both cum."

With that said, Keichii moved back and watched as the reluctant but obedient Urd crossed to her suddenly trembling sister and engulfed her in a strong hug.

While Belldandy returned the kiss and hug as ordered, she was more hesitant than her sister, especially when Urd swayed side to side, rubbing her cloth-covered breasts against her own.

Being lately traumatically conditioned to respond to stimulation, Belldandys' nipples sprang almost painfully erect, and she began to respond actively to her sisters' actions.

This was shown when she grabbed the shoulders of Urd's dress and pulled them down sharply, baring her sisters' breasts and trapping her arms at the same time.

Belldandy took this opportunity to end their kiss, and, cupping Urd's breasts in her hands, commenced to kiss, suck, and lick them, using the lessons she'd learned on her own body to know what to do to rouse her sister the most.

This aggression from Belldandy took Urd by surprise. She'd always been the sexually active one of the two, and while she'd never had erotic thoughts towards her siblings, this wasn't the first time she'd made love to another female. Before she and Mara became enemies, they'd explored each other's bodies in curiosity.

That encounter was nothing like this. If Urd had thought anything about making love to her sister, it would have been her taking the initiative. 

With Belldandy actually turning the tables on her, trapping her and making her receive the stimulation instead of giving it, she was turning her on faster than ever before. 

If a small voice in the back of her mind put forth that being forced to fuck her sister was what had gotten to her, she managed to ignore it as she felt Belldandy push a hand through the slit in her dress and slip some fingers into her receptive cunt.

The two sisters were now fully committed to the task at hand, and it was possible that if Keichii had told them to stop, that they would not have wanted to, because they were now genuinely passionate about what they were doing.

Fortunately, Keichii didn't want them to stop. In fact, he went behind Urd, and with strength that didn't seem possible in his slender frame, grabbed hold of the back of her dress, and ripped it right off her body, leaving both sisters equally bare.

This interruption barely fazed them, only allowing Urd to return Belldandys' caresses. Now locked passionately together, the two sank to the floor, where Urd finally was able to regain control and had Belldandy laying on her back beneath her.

Carefully positioning their bodies so that they were cunt to cunt, breasts to breasts, nipples touching, Urd began to rock back and forth, so that they stimulated each other's most sensitive places.

Urd had stopped thinking of the female beneath her as her sister any more, it was only a person that she felt love for, and the signs of passion appearing on that dear face, the widened, vacantly staring eyes, flaring nostrils, and breath panting out of invitingly pouting lips intoxicated her like no liquor ever had, as well bringing a tingle to where their bodies were contacting.

Belldandy was even further gone. Although fully aware it was her sister she was making love to, she didn't care any more, although she dimly felt that she should.

What she was concentrating on right now were the sensations she was receiving from her sisters' body on her own, and remembering how it felt when Keichii went down on her, she wanted to share it with Urd.

Taking her by surprise, Belldandy rolled Urd under her and sat up on her stomach. Giving her a very un-sisterly smile, she stated, "Just lie there for a bit and I'll make you very happy."

Not giving her a chance to protest, Belldandy scooted down until she could lean forward and place her lips and tongue onto Urd's pussy.

When she felt that, Urd lost any interest in protesting, especially when her sister licked her slit from one end to the other. When she next introduced 1, 2, and 3 fingers into Urd's tunnel, all resistance melted and she let Belldandy do as she wished.

This relaxed state disappeared when she felt Belldandy start nibbling on her clit. The unexpectedness of it actually brought her to a mini orgasm.

Seeing Urd convulse in an orgasm brought a smile to Belldandys' face, and feelings of satisfaction and accomplishment.

It also made Urd feel selfish.

Panting from the quick jolt she'd just had, she told her sister, "Slide your hips up here, I want to return the favor."

Nothing loth, Belldandy did as requested, and the next few minutes were filled with the sounds of two females in the throes of passion. Moans, moist lapping sounds, and exclamations of delight came from them.

Gradually though, the sounds changed, becoming more urgent, the bodies gyrated faster, and the breaths came harder.

The sisters saw how the other reacted to each kiss, lick, and touch, and it acted like a feedback loop, raising their own passions.

The moment came when they couldn't hold back any more, and they yelled their completion into each others' cunts even while trying to swallow the juices being presented to their mouths.

When they finally came down, they naturally gravitated into each others' arms, where they traded kisses and caresses, knowing that things had changed between them forever.

The Goddess sisters were startled out of their tender mood by the sound of clapping. Looking around, they noticed Keichii, and were shocked and mortified to see that he'd gotten a video camera and had been filming them without their notice.

Seeing the shock on the girls' faces, he explained, "I felt that such a historic moment needed to be preserved for posterity, and I just happened to have this to hand." Here he gave a fond pat to the camera, still running.

"It's a pity, though, that I didn't think to do this for Belldandy and I last night," he mourned.

Giving them a bright smile, he continued. "There's no reason, though, that future times can't be recorded, and Belldandy can record my and Urd's first time. The fine performance you two put on has gotten me as hard as a rock."

Now that they looked, they could see that this was true. Keichii still hadn't put his Aoyama-sempais back on, and it was easily seen that his cock was standing up flat against his stomach, it was so hard.

Telling Urd to stay where she was, he called Belldandy to him and gave her a quick lesson on how to run the camera. 

After giving her sweaty, leaking body an appreciative once-over, and her fanny a fond pat, with an admonition to, "Don't miss a thing," he walked over to where Urd was waiting for him.

Recalling her disparaging remarks, he decided she needed a lesson taught, so stretching his left foot, and telling her to open her legs, he pushed his big toe into her wet cunt, and said, "Well, it looks like this mortal can control the Gods, or in this case, Goddesses."

Adding insult to injury, he went on, "And it certainly looks like you liked obeying me too!"

After pressing as much of his foot into her as he could, he deliberately wriggled his toes inside her before pulling them out with a wet squelch and showing the camera the liquid dripping off of it.

Swinging on his right heel, he turned and placed his dripping foot, heel-first, between Urd's breasts.

After saying to Belldandy, "I want you to get a close-up of this," he turned back to Urd and told her, "I want you to suck all your juices off of my foot, and when you're finished, lick the entire thing clean."

When Urd found that she couldn't resist this command, she gave Keichii a dirty look even as she found herself sucking on his big toe. Once she had a taste of her own juices, however, she was reminded of how she came to have produced it, and that he was the one that had made the encounter possible.

Even if it had been her own sister she'd made love to, she couldn't regret it, for she'd discovered something precious with Belldandy, a depth of feeling towards each other that they may never have discovered if not for this mortal. 

So, although it was not what she would have chosen, Urd found herself softening towards Keichii, and began to obey his order with true zeal.

Urd's change in manner caught Keichii by surprise. As he watched her expression go from angry, to thoughtful, to accepting, he tried to guess what was going on in her mind.

The way her tongue stroking his foot was no longer quick, perfunctory swipes, but long, lingering strokes. She even brought both hands up to lift and hold his foot in place while she licked the sole from heel to toe tips. She even sucked on his individual toes and lapped in between them.

Her change in manner bewildered Keichii, but also softened his anger at her. When she'd finished cleaning his foot and actually started over, he told her, "That's okay, you can stop now."

As she did, he could swear that she looked almost.disappointed when he lifted his foot off her body.

This last reaction decided him that he'd humiliated Urd enough, so he only asked her, "Do you believe now that I control you?"

Urd just looked up at him for a moment before answering him softly, "Yes, I do. You've made me do things I would never have thought of doing on my own," and after giving Belldandy a warm, come-hither look, went on to say, "I even enjoyed it and wouldn't have missed it for anything."

When she heard what she'd just said, Urd realized that she meant every word of it, and looked up at Keichii in wonder.

Hearing that unexpected declaration, and seeing the look on her face, Keichii softened even further towards her.

The only response he could think of was, "In that case, I think we'll get along just fine. Why don't we get better acquainted ourselves?"

Since this last was said with a suggestive perusal of her spread-out charms, Urd had no illusions as to what he meant.

To her surprise, she found herself responding to that look, and wondering how Keichii's cock would feel inside her. The way that Belldandy had responded to him made her think he knew his way around a females' body.

This was denied when Keichii told her, "I'm afraid Belldandy is the only female I've ever fucked, so you're going to have to teach me what you like."

At first disappointed, Urd soon thought that here was a chance to see if he would really let her set the pace, or if he would take control.

So, with slowly mounting enthusiasm, Urd began to teach Keichii how to properly make love to a woman, according to her.

Taking his hands, she brought them to her breasts and showed him how she liked them felt. Then, pulling him down with her own hands, she presented them to him and told him how to suck, lick, and nibble on them gently.

His obedience resulted in stimulating her so much that she stopped that and brought him into an embrace where she taught him how to duel with tongues. From there, she had him kiss her eyelids, behind her ears, and to run his tongue over the sensitive shell of her earlobes.

This action had both of them getting hot, with Urd forgetting that her initial impression of Keichii had been negative. Giving into the lust she was now feeling, Urd urged him onto his back, then sat up herself.

Initially, Keichii wanted to protest her moving away. He was silenced when Urd leaned over him and started kissing and licking her way down his body. He hadn't known that male nipples were erogenous zones. He found out differently when Urd ran her tongue in lazy circles around one and then the other.

That unexpected sensation made his breath catch in the back of his throat, and ran down his body to his straining hard-on, making it even harder if possible.

By the time Urd had made her way down to his erection, he was barely holding his release back. The first touch of her hand on his straining member pushed him over the edge and resulted in him ejaculating all over Urd's face and hanging breasts, with some falling onto his own stomach and filling his belly-button.

Rather than being upset about this, Urd took it as a compliment to her prowess. What she did do was to sit up and face Keichii. Looking him in the eyes, she proceeded to scoop his come off her face with her hands and lick it off. She then proved that it was possible for her to lift her breasts high enough for her agile tongue to lick the dripping streams of semen off.

Once she'd finished herself, Urd gave him a cheerful wink, then bent down and licked the rest off of his body.

Maybe not surprising given her actions, but Keichii's erection hadn't gone down a bit during Urd's cleanup.

When Urd noticed, she was impressed with his stamina, and decided to take advantage of it. So she straddled his hips and, lifting his still-twitching cock up, lowered her cunt onto it.

She hissed in pleasure as he filled her, then leaned forward to place her hands on the floor on either side of Keichii's head.

Urd was so much taller than he that this left her tits hanging directly over his lips.

This prompted Keichii to grab them and hold them in place when Urd commenced to sway forward and back, stretching the flesh when she impaled herself onto his cock, then balloonong out when she moved off it.

This was a new sensation for Urd, one that she wasn't sure she liked. That was, until Keichii started licking her nipples, first the left then the right. When he begin to give them love nips, she lost it completely.

Speeding up her motions on top of him, it didn't take long for Urd to become a writhing, yelling bundle of orgasming flesh.

Trying to retain his hold on Urd made it impossible for Keichii to keep his place inside her. He wasn't disappointed, though, for he remembered what he did when he came out of Belldandy.

Once the female in his arms ceased moving, he rolled her onto her back and took a look at her body. Her hair was matted and stuck to her body with her sweat, her face was flushed, with panting breaths coming from her open mouth. Her breasts were sitting solidly on her chest, with the nipples still erect.

Spreading her legs to look at Urd's pussy, he could see that the lips were flushed red and open, as if he were still inside her. Her juices leaked from her cunt down her crack, and flowed past her ass-hole, which was a small, wrinkled pucker in the smooth flesh of her crack.

Taking advantage of her supine position, Keichii placed his well-lubricated cock against Urd's asshole and pressed forward, forcing the head through the first ring of muscles with a hard thrust of his hips.

Urd, in the afterglow of her orgasm, could have cared less what Keichii was doing. When she felt him shift her body and separate her legs, she assumed that he was going to finish off in her cunt.

Thinking that, it took a few moments to notice where he was pressing in. That hesitation gave him enough time to fully penetrate her before she thought of resisting.

The thought of what he was doing to her was interrupted by a flash of pleasure when Keichii strummed her clit with his thumb. This decided her that she liked what he was doing, and began to fully participate in the fuck.

Reaching down, Urd grabbed his asscheeks and pulled him forward, trying to get him deeper into her ass.

This action encouraged Keichii, and he commenced to saw in and out of Urd, continuing to stimulate her with his hand as he did.

The two were so involved with each other that they'd forgotten all about the one who was filming their tryst.

Belldandy had begun filming with relustance, obeying Keichiis' command, but just keeping them both in the frame.

She was amazed that as time went on, she saw tenderness replace anger and defiance, and found herself taking close-ups of their faces as they kissed and licked each other.

As the pair continued, Belldandy found herself experiencing an emotion that at first she couldn't understand. When she saw Urd smile at Keichii, however, she realized with shock that it was jealousy.

As she contrasted this encounter with her first one with Keichii, she found herself wishing that it could have been as tender.

Thinking that, she returned to filming the two with a will, deciding that this special time, the first time between her beloved sister Urd and, now their, Keichii, deserved her best effort at recording.

It therefore came to pass the first fuck of the, now, two most important people in her life was lovingly recorded by Belldandy from it's rocky beginning, to their softening towards each other and giving their separate orgasms, to their mutual come with Keichii in Urd's ass, Belldandy recorded it all.

So caught up was she in what she was doing that she never noticed when one hand unconciously crept down to her own pussy when Urd mounted Keichii.

She took her other hand from the camera when Keichii ass-fucked Urd, bringing it up to stimulate her nipples as she remembered how that felt.

She finally had to drop to the floor as her own arousal was stimulated by the other two going off.

Urd came first, then Keichii as her internal muscles contracted around him. Belldandy came at the sight and sound of the others' release.

They all collapsed, although Belldandy mustered up the strength to crawl on hands and knees to wrap herself around the other two.

Sobbing in joy for Keichii and Urd, Belldandy spread kisses and caresses impartially, saying, "That was so beautiful! I wish my firat time had been like that."

Belldandys' voice pierced the post-orgasmic haze and Keichii turned to her, gave her a hug and kiss, and told her, "Don't worry, it'll be like this from now on for all of us."

With this promise, he rolled off of Urd and, bringing Belldandy with him, lay with a girl on each arm, and they all lay there resting, occasionally exchanging kisses and huge, and if the kisses the sisters give each other are just as sexy as the ones that Keichii receives, it no longer seems strange, it's the way things are now.

This touching scene was interrupted by the phone ringing, causing Keichii to reluctantly untangle himself from the huddle to go answer it.

When he'd gone, the sisters came together in a tight hug, enjoying the comfort of body to body contact.

While enjoying the new closeness she had with her sister, Urd had to ask, "Bell, what can we do about this? There has to be a way to void his wish and get us home."

It took Belldandy repeating what Kami-Sama told her about the Bug that finally convinced Urd that there was nothing they could do to change their circumstances.

Just as she was about to ask more questions, Keichii came back into the room with a bemused expression on his face.

This distracted the sisters from their conversation, and prompted Belldandy to ask, "What's wrong Keichii?"

"That phone call was from my Sempai to let me know that the last race was called on account of rain, and they'll be coming back early," was his reply.

The girls couldn't see why this was cause for his expression.

Realizing this, Keichii went on, "The problem is that this is a male only dorm. Anyone who brings a female into it will be thrown out. I was just trying to think of where you could go."

At this explanation, Urd and Belldandy glanced at each other and said together, "Uh-Oh!"

This piqued Keichii's curiosity, and he asked, "Why did you say that? You two can just find another place to stay, and I'll just visit you."

Both Goddesses shuddered at the implications of that remark, and Urd tried to explain.

"You don't understand, your Wish is being enforced by the Ultimate Force, the power that keeps the Universe functioning. You wished for us to be with you forever, so forever will we be with you.

"Anything which tries to separate us will be dealt with by it's power. There is no way to tell how it will react. It could be something as simple as you getting kicked out so we have to find a place where we all can stay, or as complicated as something happening to everyone else who stays here so that we can stay. There's no way to predict it."

This struck Keichii as cause for concern, so, after dropping down to give them both a kiss and hug, he told them, "Go ahead and get cleaned up, I'm going to go out and see if I can find us a place to stay. I'll be back before the others, so don't go anywhere." With that, he left them to get dressed.


Chapter 3

Trying to keep up with this change of pace, the sisters just stared at each other until they heard the outer door slam. Moments later they heard a motorcycle start and drive away.

When they finally took in that they were alone, they came to the belated realization that they were still lying there naked in each others arms, still dripping with sweat and the products of their passion.

It wasn't their mutual nudity that bothered them, or the passion they had just shared.

Just one thought dominated their minds. "Bath," they spoke at once, startling a laugh from each.

Getting up, Belldandy led Urd to the the furo, where they took turns washing each other off with many a playful caress, and some not-so-playful kisses.

Finally getting into the hot tub, the two sat arm in arm and realized they now had time to talk about what had happened to them.

Urd started off with, "How come we're taking this so well? Not that I'm sorry about loving you," and, leaning over, gave Belldandy a kiss and a nipple tweak, "But I'm no longer resentful of what Keichii has done to us both."

Belldandy returned the kiss, and raised a nipple lick before answering thoughtfully, "I believe it's because of where his lovers have to make him happy. I know that for a person to be happy, the people around them need to be happy also. If we were unhappy with his orders, or jealous, or resentful of what he has us do, then he'd be unhappy with us." 

Seeming to realize it as she speaks, she goes on, "We have to make him happy above all things, so we have to change to do what he wants, the easiest way being to accept him as our lover and Master, obeying whatever orders he might give, even if it means making our sister our lover."

Here she breaks off to blushingly confess with her face pressed into Urd's chest, "I've always been slightly envious of your ability to display your sexuality. I came across you and Mara once a long time ago, and wondered what it would be like if I joined you."

This revelation caused Urd to look at Belldandy in shock, then smile and say, "And here I thought that sex never crossed your mind! You should have said something earlier, we could have had this long ago," and, giving her a hug, indicated what "this" was.

The two new lovers leaned contentedly against each other for a while, then reluctantly got out of the tub. After drying each other off, Urd conjured herself another dress. When she noticed that Belldandy hadn't done so as well, she asked, "Bell why aren't you getting dressed?"

Giving Urd a sheepish look, she told her, "I tried to do so this morning. I found that I could call up all I wanted, but that I couldn't stand to let any stay on my body. Keichii told me to take off my clothes off last night, and it seems that the I can't let any stay on until he says I can."

Urd doesn't see how this could be, for as she says, "I didn't have any trouble putting a new dress on."

Earnestly, Belldandy continues with, "But that's just the point, he didn't tell you to take your clothes off, he did it physically. We can do anything we normally would, but we have be loyal to Keichii, and obey his orders fully and to the best of our ability."

Not accepting her reasoning, Urd tries to clothe Belldandy with her own power. The result of this is unexpected, to say the least.

While clothing does form on her sister, it's not long before Belldandy begins to fidget. Within minutes, with an uncomfortable look on her face, energy forms around herself and destroys her dress, leaving her just as bare as before. 

Somehow, Urd knows without trying that she won't be able to put on another one on her sister.

Belldandy hid a smile behind her hand when she sees the expression on Urds' face at the results of her try, and just tells her, "Like I said, I just can't wear clothing, and now it looks as if you can't put any on me either."

Giving Belldandy a dirty look, Urd replied, "It looks like it. However did he come to word his Wish like that, anyway? It's almost as if he knew you were coming."

This question wiped the smile off Belldandy's face, and, after leading Urd into the den, she tells what happened to him while they were fighting bugs.

"If only I hadn't been so eager to grant Keichii his wish, I would have checked any updates on his file. Only a few days needed to pass and I'm sure he would have been back to normal. Now this happens, and it's all my fault!"

This last was said in almost a wail, prompting Urd to hug her sister and sooth her, saying, "It's not your fault, it was just an accident, and if that Bug hadn't interfered, nothing would have happened other than Keichii having to redo his wish. Besides..." and here she gives Belldandy a slap on her bare bottom, "it's not all bad is it?"

This brings a weak smile to Belldandy's face, and after thinking it over a moment, she suddenly returns Urd's hug with interest and states, "No, it's not something I would have ever expected to happen, but I will never be sorry about what we did."

After this, the sisters realize how suggestive their embrace was, both naked as they were, with breasts rubbing against breasts. Almost without realizing it their arms tightened, bringing their bodies together more firmly.

Before they could take it any further, they heard the door, causing them to spring apart in embaressment, and a little bit of regret as well.

Turning, they saw Keichii standing in the doorway, watching them with a smile.

Wanting to divert his attention, asked, "Did you have any luck?"

Looking bemused, Keichii stated, "It was very strange, all the Realtors I went to had were too expensive for me, or what I could afford was too small for us all. As I came out of the last one, I ran into an old monk who said I reeked of the divine, and if I needed a place to stay, he knew of a spot. When I asked if it was large enough for three, he told me it was an entire temple complex out in the hills."

Belldandy just shrugged and replied, "I knew you would find something, the Ultimate Force wouldn't allow us to be split up."

So, with the goddessess help, Keichii moved out, leaving a message to his dormmates that he'd found a place of his own that he'd see them in class.


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Author's Words:

I'm posting this revised version of my story before sending the next chapter so people who missed it the first time around won't be lost as to what came before.


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