OMITTED SCENE:I didn't know what to do with 
this scene. It didn't fit with the way I 
wanted the spamfic to go so I decided to put 
it here. Enjoy!

   The Ommited scene definately improved it.  
In the original version, I kept picturing 
Bubbles, Blossom & Buttercup.  Now I'm pic-
turing SD versions of Nene, Priss & Linna.

ROTFLMAO!

     BTW: Are you going to continue this?

"Nene, call me Saber Prime," the woman said, "or 
maybe even mother but please don't call me 
Mama-san."

Ah, a fellow "Buttons" fan.

"Okay, Mama-san," Nene replied. "Can we get some 
ice cream, please?"

Saber Prime sighed.

"HI!!!"

Leon jumped slightly at the perky voice that 
came from the Green Saber Puff Girl as she floated 
up in front of him. 

I cannot stress enough the WEIRDNESS of the mental 
image I'm getting from that line.

"My name is Priss," she stated, "And I don't 
like you." Before he could say anything in response, 
the girl drew back and promptly kicked him in the 
shin.

"OWWWWW!!!!" The Inspector started hopping around on 
his good leg as he held the other. It hurt but he was 
surprised that it was broken.

I assume you meant "wasn't broken."

"I AM NOT!" Priss shouted back. As the two argued  
and the other officers resumed their laughter at the 
scene. Leon looked at SaberPrime with a mix of confusion 
and worry as she tried to deal with girls. She 
return his gaze and for a second, he felt that she 
probably had the same expression. At that moment, Leon 
realized that his life had just gotten very strange. 

This is very good.  The number of funny BGC fics that I've
read can be counted on one hand.  The original version wasn't
one of them; The ommited scene is.

Which one of them can speak squirrel? :)


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