And on to the first person who ever wrote back to something I sent out,
telling me to email my story in plain text instead of an attachment that
wouldn't open... :)
HTG wrote:
Be warned, this thing is the product of my Inner Hentai and absolutely
would
not release me until it was on disk.
You awful person. Writing evil things like lemons. Shame, shame on you for
writing such trash.
The scary part is, I may continue it on my own if nobody else works up the
nerve.
Last chance to protect your virgin eyes....
I fear there is nothing virgin about me for some time now. :)
******
Shan Pu casually reclined on her bedroll and checked the clock. Mu Tse,
for all
his numerous faults, would earn far more tips from the OLs
OL?
crowding the
restaurant this evening than she
Ah.Must be Gay Biker night at the bar.
Mousse fended off another leather clad ruffian who had fondled his bottom.
"I hate my life!" he screeched.
so she did not even have to excuse herself
before she showered and retreated to her room.
*knock*
Knock
"Is open." she responded, quietly hoping it was not her Great-Grandmother
or
the Annoyance needing help. She then smiled, and Tendo Nabiki walked
through
the door still clad in her school uniform.
"Shan Pu?" the slightly older girl began, "I have-"
The Amazon interuppted Nabiki with a cluck of her tounge
tongue
and a sharp glare.
"Language!" she snapped, "Warn once!"
Nabiki's usual calm mask cracked somewhat at the reminder, and Shan Pu
noted
with amusement how unfomfortable and distracted she actually was. Still,
she
knew what was being reminded of.
Don't think you need the 'of' there.
She knew nothing of the Joketsuzoku's milk
tounge or the ancient languages that were part of Shan Pu's education,
Shampoo: Oy, including a little boot of Scootish, darlin.
and they
both spoke near-fluent English. However....
"[Warrior forgiving This One,]" Nabiki said as the flush deepened on her
cheeks, "[is bringing shadow images Warrior want see.]"
Shampoo recoiled. "[Dear god, you sound like an uneducated twit. Your tongue
tortures my beatuiful language as well as my ears.]"
"[You no speak Japanese well either], Nabiki mentioned.
"No be silly. Shampoo is too, too fluent in Japanese. No make up excuses for
bad pronounciation."
Nabiki swallowed hard as she pulled her camcorder out of her satchel and
opened
the cabinet holding the computer system Shan Pu 'appropriated' from one of
the
Triads that occasionally tried to shake down the restaurant.
Heh. Cute role reversal, especially since Nabby is the one that's usually
shaking down the Yakuza.
A moment's work,
and the monitor was set up for playback. A glance and gesture, and Nabiki
started the playback
i'd change to 'tape' since you used playback a moment earlier.
and stood by the bed.
The door was closed and the sound turned down, so there were only two
ex-post-facto witnesses to Tofu-sensei's 'examination' or
of
Nabiki's elder
sibling. Shan Pu freed a breast from her robe and lazily toyed with her
nipple
as Kodachi's gasps and cries, punctuated by the sound of her teammates'
whips
slicing across her back and lips pleasuring her clitoris filled the room.
However it was only when Ukyo (still almost wholly in her (boys') school
uniform) moaned as a kimono-clad Konatsu's shaft eased into the back
passage
'her' tongue had so lovingly cleaned and coaxed open did Nabiki whimper
and
bite her lip.
My. Throwing in everything at once, aren't you, HTG? :)
"[Incidentally, Cunning One,]" Shampoo noted absently as she stroked her
elongating nipple "[the camerawork seems a little unsteady. Are you
certain you
were using _both_ hands to hold the camera?]"
"[T-this One no take hand from camera any time.]" Nabiki stammered as her
eyes
flickered from Shan Pu's breast to the erotic scene she had already suffer
ed
through once, "[This One touch no thing in self whole day.]"
Shan Pu savored the look of physical and emotional distress the
on the
Nabiki's face burned in humiliation and need as she bent down as lifted
her
skirt, taking care to keep the front of it as far away from her as she
could.
Shan Pu's eyes gleamed and she unconciously twisted her nipple harder as
she
saw what was revealed, for imperfectly contained and bent painfully within
panties rendered transparent by pre-cum was a visibly throbbing penis
nearly
30cm long complete with a well filled scrotum.
Nabiki's been hiding secrets as well, I see. :)
"[Please Great Warrior,]" Nabiki begged, "[This One must release!]"
#It is amazing what one can do with the right mixtures of Instant Jusenkyo
Water(tm).# Shan Pu observed silently as she licked her lips.
"[Well, you _have_ been good today....]"
So now it's time for Shampoo to be bad. :)
Sorry, I don't really have time to add to it myself, and generally avoid
round robin's like the plague. Good luck on either continuing it yourself of
getting someone else to do it.
D.B. Sommer
******
TAG!
HTG
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