And moving on to one a little over a month ago. Where does the time go...

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Only Human
An Ah! My Goddess Fanfic
By Roehl Sybing (indef@infinitedeferral.com)

Chapter Seven: Tell Me Lies

Tell me sweet little lies. :)

"Shut up."

No exclamation point.

Keiichi, from the second they arrived home, did exactly as he was
told: sit in front of the television set and stay out of the
impending storm.

Smart man. He's now ready for the married life.

 He was still not aware

stilll unaware

"If I could just stay like this forever," were her last words
before the sounds of anxiety and distress turned to ones of gentle
and quiet sleep.  Belldandy had slipped into unconsciousness,
resting quite comfortably on Keiichi.

Hmm. Well, it as a nice little scene, but not much to go on as it is. Just a
little snippet of your larger fic. It works, for as brief as it is.

D.B. Sommer

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