I feel like pointing out that Shuma-Gorath-Chan does in fact have a
gimmick.  He takes cute and innocent things and makes them evil.
Thus, evil baby, evil alphabet blocks, evil rocking horse.  Presumably
if he'd stuck around longer we would have seen evil stuffed toys and
evil Hello Kitty panties.

Me, I think

"I think I understand the material better," Ranma admitted. He was becoming
a bit concerned at Akane's behavior. She didn't seem like herself.

Geez.  Ranma sounds like he's thirty.

Her mouth said one thing, but it was obvious from her actions the
opposite
was true. Like a shark smelling blood in the water, Ranma persisted.
"Look,
whatever is bothering you I'll take care of it."

comma after "you"

Does the failure of the soul attack indicate that Kachiko doesn't have
one?


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