In a message dated 8/24/02 10:45:47 PM Eastern Daylight Time, 
mchase@ix.netcom.com writes:

 You might want to move on to the second draft.  Some, but not all, of the
 issues you raised were dealt with there.

    Darn it.  I need to quit my real job and C&C for a living.  *Then* maybe 
I could catch up...
  

 The next draft changes that to subspace.  The problem of finding a server
 at the other end still exists though.  If she can't do that, perhaps she
 can at least make comumicators for the priestesses.

    Now that's a good idea.
  

 >     Y'know, if Amy ever stops redirecting (there's a psych word for 

this, 

but 
 > I can't recall it) her sexual energies into science, this fic is gonna 

go 

 > Lemon faster than Bubblegum Pink!
 
 I think the word you are looking for is sublimate.

    That's the word I *wanted* to use, but all I could remember is that 
that's the term for solid matter converting to gas without passing through a 
liquid phase in between -- like dry ice.
  

 With Dr. Anderson's connection to the military police, I'd be very
 surprised if Amy Lynn hasn't had at least some firearms safety training. 
 Amy Lynn having theoretical knowledge of a lot of differnt guns from
 scanning her mother's magazines would not be surprising.  I expect Janice
 is a strong believer in feminine protection.

    "Here's your month's supply of the Pill...and a box of condoms (heavy 
duty, lubricated, spermicide-treated)...and a can of Mace...and 
pistol...castration knife...hand grenade..."
  

 > Her *entire* adult life?  I thought she was in a civilian practice (the 
 > one that got shut down under criminal charges) before the beginning of 

Ch 

1.  
 > Or is she including Reserve time?  And is she still *in* the Reserve?
 
 In the latest chapter 1, she is using her status as a medic in a reserve
 military police unit as a dodge to let her practice medicine in Juuban
 Hollow until the civilian paperwork catches up.  I don't know if that would
 really be legal, but I'm willing to accept her trying it for the sake of
 the story.

    Ah.  Forget that part.
  

 > And wait until Amy discovers that her visor's adaptive ECM suite can be 
 > programed to hack into sattelite-based internet systems.  Still not as 
fast 
 > as a T1, since the bottleneck will be on the *other* end of the system, 
but 
 > still better than AO--I mean, USA DirectConnect.
 
 I rather fancied that was how she was dealing with the temporary loss of
 the laptop.  All those new instruments to probe the universe with.

  
    I have this image of Amy lying on her bed with her visor active, and her 
hands -- NO!  BAD IMAGINATION!  BAD!  NO DONUT!  

-- 
David McMillan, Imagineer at Large.  
Chief Systems Analyst and Integration Engineer, Exotic Technologies Division, 
  <Censored> GmBh.  Mecha and Weapons Design Specialist.
"Agent Mulder?  My name is Neo.  I believe I may be able to show you part of 
the truth you've been searching for.  I should warn you, however -- it's not 
what you think."
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