Suggested changes: {before : after}

Ok... I'm going to skip over the minor, obvious stuff....

Once again, an uncomfortable silence gripped the group. Ranma wanted to
say something, but he really didn't know what to say.

Weedhopper has learned some wisdom.

more like reedhopper (bad Jusenkyou pun... shoot me)

Ranma stepped back. "Hey, what did I do?"

He winced as the sentence left his mouth. Bad reply.

Maybe not much though.

hehe ; )

Louder.  Maybe some one in Tibet didn't hear you.

No, the Tibetans hear her fine... it's the Americans she has to speak up
for.

Hotaru looked down into her beef bowl and sighed. What the hell was
with these two? Haruka-papa just seemed to hate Ranma on general
{principle : principles}, while Ranma took ever one of her snide and

threatening

remarks as a challenge to be met, feeding into her. Between all their
bitching and screaming, they barely had time to eat their food.

As I said before, it's a guy thing.

Quite ^_^

"Well, your either a real baka, soaking blows even though ya can't take
'em or ya got some kinda huge magical {handicap : advantage}."

Haruka's eyes narrowed. "Magical {handicap : advantage}?!"

He considers it a handicap... they could get to that level with work and
effort. If you get it for free you're just going to get free powers... and
you'll never put the effort in to learn on your own.

That said, he has NO problem with them useing their senshi powers to kill
demons or defend people... but useing them in a situation like a duel of
honor and the general "freelunch" factor peeves him.

It aught to give her something to think about concerning the odds when she
spars with Ranko next as well; even transformed.  Too bad they can't get
Nabiki to sell tickets, it should be quite a show.

That it will be..... real light show ; )

- Sama


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