A few more nitpicks for you.
--On 7/14/02 4:13 PM -0400 Sam Vilsmeier wrote:
Ranma blinked, "We never told you where we're going."
Setsuna smiled mysteriously. "I know exactly where you're going. Would you
like me to tell these two where and why?" She said, motioning to Haruka
and Michiru.
...
Ranma blinked, and gave her a inquisitive look, "You said you already
knew!"
Setsuna laughed. "No, I didn't, but making you think I did had the desired
effect."
Actually, yes she did say it. :-)
Ranma pushed it back towards her. "I want to buy her one with my own
money. I don't want to have to depend of everybody for everything."
...depend on everybody...
"I tell them about 'Ranko-chan', as soon as you can."
"I'd tell them...
Knowing his luck one this would find a way to get back to one of the
fianc�es. He didn't know how, he didn't know when, but it would, and it
did he was a dead man, no questions asked.
Knowing his luck, this would... ...and when it did...