inspired by what you wrote:






Hammer under finger,

Will intent but holding on

Will she follow me?



As open as sky

Wishing it even wider

Ill wait for her call



Hours pass and I stand

The steel getting heavier

Now, two voices cry



One more night, (or ten)

The burden, but Ill hang on

You called and I'll stay



One more night till dawn

Whatever smiles in return

My secret's for you.







With thanks.



----- Original Message ----- 
From: <DorianVal@aol.com>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Thursday, July 04, 2002 10:52 AM
Subject: [FFML] [Haiku] [Original] The Gun God's Haiku (Revision 2)

The Gun God's Haiku


Gun drawn, trigger pulled 

Lead screams, a deadly thunder 

Men die, souls wing west  


A God of New War 

Dark city streets, his temples 

Cordite, his incense

Jeremy Harper 

Sic pereant omnes inimici tui, Domine

Thus perish all your enemies O Lord




















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