Subject: [FFML] Re: [fanfic][ranma]Divided I Stand: Part III
From: Michael A Chase
Date: 6/19/2002, 4:42 PM
To: Donald Lee Granberry <noharness@mac.com>, "ffml@anifics.com" <ffml@anifics.com>


Suggested changes: {before : after}

On Wed, 19 Jun 2002 07:20:49 -0500 Donald Lee Granberry
<noharness@mac.com> wrote:

Well, I've been interrupted. I gotta go do a dab of database work. Seein' as
how that's the case, I'll drop this little cliffhanger on you guys. Maybe
that'll hold ya until I can finish Part XVI of CtCD.

That just makes it worse, but you knew that.

       "True, but most of them think you, or Kasumi {one, no : at least, know} a
little folk medicine, and Nabiki has been feeding children as
fast as she can cook rice."

      "Big Mercy! Big Mercy, Angel Five! Purple smoke!" Tanaka
said into his microphone as he dropped a smoke grenade onto
the pavement. "Clinic is _west_ of school!"

I like Seargant Tanaka.  He shows a cool head calling for backup first.

      "Gun down!" Tanaka bellowed, as his training took
control. Sight picture, squeeze. The M16A2 rifle barked. For
reasons that Tanaka did not understand, the tinkling of
ejected brass always bothered him more than the muzzle blast.

Little cliffhanger.  Aye.
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