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On Sun, 2 Jun 2002 21:18:58 -0700 (PDT) Thryth <thrythlind@yahoo.com>
wrote:
He thought about what had happened last night. They'd
woken up in each other's arms...and then had gone back
to sleep like that, with discussion about talking
later. But Nabiki had been the one to suggest going
ahead and sleeping together, really together. Which
was how he was able to enjoy her presence right now.
Ranma glanced at the clock, it was almost ten o'clock
in the morning. Nabiki was going to be really upset
when she finally woke up. He should be training
himself, but if he moved {to : too} much, she woke up.
"Never mind," Nabiki said. "Midori wants to watch her
daddy train, you go do that, I'll salvage what I can
this morning."
"Yeah, Daddy," Midori insisted tugging at him.
No musical hum? At her age, I'd expect it to be automatic unless someone
noticed what it does and trained her to not do it unintentionally.
"That he is," Nabiki said, looking up from the want
ads {of : in} the paper and glancing toward Ranma for a
moment. The expression didn't change much from
Nabiki's normal amused face, but Megumi recognized the
look in her eyes from watching Belldandy and Keiichi.
Strangely enough it also had a trace of uncertainty to
it.
"Ranma {will : can} only teach privately at the moment," she
said simply. "Anyway, between us, something will turn
up. It always does." She said that with absolute
certainty.
"I hope so," Megumi said. "If we break {: the} lease, we're in
real trouble."
"Glad to hear it," Megumi said. "Oh yeah, I almost
forgot, I saw Belldandy on {Campus : campus}. She and Keiichi
have a free hour coming up and said they'd like to
talk to you about something."
"{What : Will : Would} it be okay if Skuld watches your daughter at the
playscape while we talk?" Belldandy asked. Nabiki and
Ranma glanced in that direction and exchanged a look,
apparently coming to a decision they turned back to
Belldandy.
"Have you really?" Belldandy asked. "Have you not,
every time, known what was needed, adapted to acquire
it, and never truly {last : lost} faith?" She looked from
Nabiki to Ranma to Midori pointedly.
"I've always been good at handling things," Nabiki
said. "And adaptivity is the {corner stone : cornerstone} of Ranma's
martial arts style. As for Midori, why WOULDN'T anyone
do everything they can for their child." {:
}Belldandy
smiled again. Nabiki wished she wouldn't do that, it
sort of reminded her of Kasumi a little.
"You have some paperwork to {fill : fill out : complete}," Belldandy
explained. "And Kami-sama would like to speak to you.
After that you shall be back here again. As I said,
you have a number of promises to keep."