Subject: [FFML] Re: [fic][Ranma.5] The Dragons Child Cronicles [full revised version]
From: "L.S McGill" <lsmcgill@hotmail.com>
Date: 6/2/2002, 12:22 AM
To: kaitelan@ix.netcom.com
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Nope.  Thanks for pointing that out.  the original has the line, the revised 
doesn't because I was playing with cutting out the OMG storyline altogether. 
  That will need a correction.

LSM


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Date: Sat, 01 Jun 2002 20:30:57 -0700
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On Thu, 30 May 2002 23:44:27 -0400, L.S McGill wrote:

 >
 >This is a monster, I know.  Submitted for C&C, comments, ripping apart 
ect,
 >is the full text of the revised Ranma 1/2: The Mandarin, and the still in

You wanted to know about plot holes.

When the Loremaster in Part 1 Chapter 7 tells the story of the
first  sister-wife she does not describe the "kami" that
appeared to them.

Yet Urd is stunned by the Loremaster's tale:

 >relieved, but the Loremasters tale had stunned her... A goddess with white
 >hair and golden skin...

Where did Urd hear this description of the "kami"?  Not from the
Loremaster, unless I'm missing something.



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