--On 5/19/02 10:11 PM +1000 gjo@its.unimelb.edu.au wrote:
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Ah, somebody else who uses CVS. :-)
LONELINESS.
A Nadesico fanfic by Greg O'Sullivan (gjo@unimelb.edu.au)
http://ariel.ucs.unimelb.edu.au/~gjo/nadesico/
It's traditional to include a disclaimer.
"I'm reading a huge power buildup in their PT engines, they have a
PT cannon. Get out of there!"
A holograph of Inez had appeared in all the pilot's cockpits.
Many of your paragraphs that begin with quotes have the later lines
indented.
"Engage those fighters, we almost have our PT cannon back online."
"Yes Captain, but I think two dead fiances are enough for any girl."
Huh? I don't get it.
He would have a hard decision to make when they arrived, someone was
going to be hurt. The pure gold of Yurika's love or the hard diamond
of Ryoko's. He didn't want to discard either.
Akito got out the Gekigangar disks and turned up the volume to drown
out the frantic banging on his door.
He retreated once again into the world of Gekigangar.
Ahhh, Miss Nanako, Akito thought.
THE END.
It's nice to see a Nadesico fic; I thought it was a great show.
This fic has an interesting premise, Ryoko & Akito getting together in the
absence of the usual chaos & competition. But pitching them back into the
fire after starting a relationship seemed rather harse. I'd rather see
them stay in the other 'string'. :-)
Jim