Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic][R.5/SM][Draft]Awkward Consequences 3
From: "Thermopyle" <Thermopyle@tds.net>
Date: 5/16/2002, 4:54 AM
To: <ffml@anifics.com>, "Capeboy" <capeboy@adelphia.net>



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From: "Capeboy" <capeboy@adelphia.net>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Wednesday, May 15, 2002 11:21 PM
Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic][R.5/SM][Draft]Awkward Consequences 3






Ryouga gave Ranma a wide, predatory grin showing his fangs. "That's my

job."


to care?


No, to kill him.


I know.  But the way he says it, it could read quite easily as him saying it's
his job to care.  Meant that it needed to be rephrased to indicate that it's
Ryouga's job to kill him.


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