Suggested changes: {before : after}
I know you originally planned to stop writing fanfiction after this was
complete. Is that still the plan or are you thinking of a sequal? Life
goes on in this universe, so there is plenty of opportunity.
On Wed, 01 May 2002 21:17:02 -0700 Jamie and Bridget Wilde <wildeman@gci-net.com> wrote:
TSG-E3.txt:
Akari had taken the {discover : discovery} of his secret indentity well, he mused
darkly. She had {been suspecting : suspected} for months that the company's mascot and
Akane's beloved pet was none other than her much-adored husband, and to
finally see his transformation in action produced little more than a gasp
of surprise followed by a soft chuckle. She then gave him some hot water
without another word about the incident, and kissed him on the cheek as he
had dressed himself with a red face of shame. Sometimes he wondered if he
deserved to have such a loving and devoted wife.
"Why, our baby, of course," she cooed lovingly in reply.
Ryouga went rigid, his eyes glazing over.
"Baby?" he squeaked.
Women seem to take particular pleasure in finding unexpected ways to break
that news. Maybe it's partial compensation for carrying a medicine ball
around for several months.