As much as I like your other fics, This is going to stay one
of my favorites!
This is the story series, I use to illustrate what an SI can
be. Oh it's not perfect but when you first released it, it
was one of the better ones to use the framing device and I
liked the merger approach. The only other one to approach
this is Twister's tales and he doesn't write any more.
I admit your spacing in the Hiryou Shoten Ha or HI RYUU
SHOUTEN HA is odd but not the strangest I have seen. I also
like the fact you use the English words instead of trying
to phonetically spell them out. Other than that I admit I
didn't see much difference. Still I am glad to see it again.
I hope you will continue to finish the series, I never have
seen an end to part three. I always wondered what would
happen if he found himself in a no-win situation and EVA is
about that. Fighting God's messengers and NERV is about as
no-win as you can get unless you link in a devil or demon.
I also admit to wondering if he ever entered a life similar
to one he had left, a second Ranma or something.
--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSON@prodigy.net
If violence is not solving your
problems you're just not using enough of it.
Misato
"I guess I'm just an old-fashioned sentimentalist at heart.
I refuse
to accept a no-win scenario. I hate the thought of a
universe without
justice. If the maneuverings of dark powers can't be
exposed and
defeated by the pure of heart, then there's no point in
anything. I
can't believe that."
-- Benjamin Hutchins
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