Jerry Levine wrote:
Disclaimer: While several of the characters used herein belong to the
author, many others do not and are the property of their respective
creators. This author makes no pretense of having any rights to their
names, series, or respective properties.
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Getting Home Wednesday
Interlude 2: Rockville
"Do you hear me? Do you care?"
Previous Chapters at: http://www.patchmonkey.net
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Wheeeee!
The youngest of three sat at her computer, her soft features outlined by
the glow of the monitor in the darkness. Her hands moved swiftly as she
began to write in her journal, the one that she had encrypted so her
older sister couldn't read it.
- Journal Entry 0104/53 -
Missing / ?
Anyway, that's in for now, journal. I hear Kasumi telling me to take a
bath, and I think I need one.
- End -
- Encryption Complete. -
Hehehe...
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The youngest of three sat at her computer, her soft features outlined by
the glow of the monitor in the darkness. Her hands moved swiftly as she
began to write in her daily log, the one that she had encrypted so her
older sister couldn't read it. Not that her older sister would be able
to read it anyway. She'd made her own language just to make sure.
I like the symetry. Works very well.
Hmm...oh! I added a new defense system to Banpei. He's now got a stun
ray, which Belldandy likes a lot more than the old system, which simply
launched intruders into Godanno Park.
I think I'm gonna do some snooping now...hehehe.
- End Log -
- Encyrption and recoding process complete. -
- File stored. -
*snicker*
Well, not much to comment on -- especially since you're using first
person, but I STILL like the story...
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Maybe more someday again...
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... and I'd still like to see more. Good to see you writing again. :)
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