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From: "Christopher J Olsen" <GAMERS@prodigy.net>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Friday, December 14, 2001 19:44
Subject: [FFML] [Ranma/SM]A Different Viewpoint: Curses and Demons: Chapter
21

    As Mina's wandering hands started to wander a bit too freely, Rei
stamped firmly down on her {: own} libido and grabbed for her friend's

arms,

stopping them from going any further.  "Mina, before you do anything you
might regret... this is NOT a dream."

    Ranma laughed nervously.  "Heh... you should probably ask Ryoga
about that... it's not my place to say."  < One revelation at {at : a}

time!>

Putting his hand behind his head and trying not to break out into a
sweat, Ranma continued.  "So anyway, they found out that Cliopatra had
kept Kasumi locked up in this maze full of death traps, and they
couldn't figure out any way of getting her out of there.  At least not
until Shampoo figured out that while a person couldn't make it through
the traps, a cat could go through them without setting any of them off.
So while Johnathon and Ryoga were sleeping, Shampoo snuck off to see
Kasumi, and she dragged Johnathon's bottle of water from the spring of
drowned {man : cat} with her, as well as a note to Kasumi, explaining what

her

plan was."

His desensitization also happened after the spring of drowned Akane was
created, so she might be surprised he doesn't stumble over 'cat'.  She's
getting a lot dumped on her at once, so it's understandable that she doesn't
notice right away.

    Akane looked shocked.  "So many...."  She frowned.  "Hey!  Why did
{Kasumi : Misty} have to test it?"

    Ranma sat down next to her, looking apologetic.  "Hey, it's not like
I minded you being... well... exciting.  You've always been the smarter
one of us, Akane.  Ya got a good imagination, and I can't complain.
Going after Ranko like you did... well I can understand that too.  You
love her the same way you love me.  You didn't want to give either of us
up.  If it hadn't been for my idiot pop making that promise to marry me
to Ukyo, you wouldn't have had to... but {momma : Momma} pointed out that

if there

was a way to honor both promises, we were honor bound to do so, no
matter how much it hurt."

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