A very interesting short. Of course, part of the mechanism here is
leaving the reader wondering what, if anything, from this
financially necessary act visits Nodoka and her absent family in
future, but it's fun to speculate: :)

NABIKI: Gee, Obasan... *Holds up the year-old centerfold.* Too bad
the guys didn't make you sign a discretion honor pact to go along
with the manly thing.

NODOKA: ... erk...

:P

Kudos. Nicely done.

Yours,

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