Wow.  Real ficcage, not pointless character/canon debates.  What a novel
concept.

Now that my snarkiness is over and done with...


WAI!  John-ficcage! WAIWAIWAIWAIWAIWAIWAIWAI *bonk* ite....

As usual, John, another excellent Chapter to an excellent series.  I
particularly liked how this chapter was in many ways centered on Ranma and
Rei, without actually FEATURING them.

Nitpicks:
1) The good guys need to get a break.  The amount of sh*t they're going
through is starting to detract from my enjoyment of the work.

2) Gos goes from falling-over-himself geek to
grand-master-of-the-witty-reparte a little too cleanly in this.  (Particuar
scene in which I noticed this - him and Makoto making out in the car.)

3) Well, I was going to complain about the cliche-ness of Ryouga and Ami,
but I decided to let that slide, especially with what you've done to
Setsuna. ^_^;

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Christopher Angel
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