Interesting. I really only have one complaint, and that's more of a question 
of style, that is, my take on the characters is differnet then yours. Bearing 
that in mind. . .

Ranma's eloquence is a bit much for someone with very little social skills. 
Perhaps very rusty social skills is a better term. I would suggest perhaps 
rougher language on Ranma's part.

Other then that, I would defintly not be adverse to seeing more of this.

-Komodo
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