And you people thought I couldn't do oneshots.

While the ending to Bubblegum Crisis: Tokyo 2040 was good
(proving once again that the new surpasses the old),

Actually I've found the opposite to be usually true. Tenchi. El Hazard.
Battle Athletes, etc  I am inclined to agree with you in the BGC case.

 it was

missing a little bit, like closure with a couple of
characters.

True.

Oh yeah, for those who haven't seen the whole thing, you
have been warned.

Spoiler is the most common term to use.

Every Time
By Andrew Wilson

Sun's going down.  Maybe it'll cool off now.

Where the hell am I, anyway?

Devil: Hell, ironically enough.

The umbrella was orbiting over Japan, and this is a desert.
China, maybe?  Or Australia?

Ah, Priss, then.

Have to admit, though, the bitch wasn't too bad in the end.
She did get me down safe.

Did Linna and Nene survive re-entry?  I wonder where they
are.

I wonder if the trailer is still there.

As long as there were no tornados, it should be fine. You know how well
tornadoes and trailers go together.

Who care's about the trailer,

trailer?

it's

It's

 not like it was home. No,

haven't had a home since the quake.

Eyelids are getting too heavy.  Can't go to sleep, not now.

Oh hell, why fight it?  Note to self: haunt Sylia's place
after death.  Serves her right.

Heh. She'd probably enjoy the company.

Ouch!  There wasn't a wind a minute ago, what's blowing all
this sand around.

Someone coming?  Come on!  Open your eyes, stupid!

Checking a pulse?  Can't you see I'm still breathing,
whoever you are?  Come on, move!

Hmm. Didn't realize she was supposed to be lying on the ground. Might want
to make a reference of her thinking how the sand is making her back itchy or
something.

Who the hell's talking.

talking?

*******

Yeah, it's short.  Yeah, it doesn't have much of a plot.  So
what?  It's just something I wanted to write after seeing
the ending.

Too short, truthfully. Not much accomplished except some insight into a
character's thoughts. Not bad. Mostly first person narrative, so it flowed
well. would be nice if it was the start of something bigger or delved more
deeply into Priss' thoughts.

Just my two cents worth.

D.B. Sommer

C&C welcome.
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