Subject: [FFML] Re: [SM][comments] Fourth Labor chapter 4 (major rough)
From: Richard Robinson
Date: 1/28/2001, 7:52 PM
To: metroanime@mindspring.com
CC: FFML <FFML@fanfic.com>

This story is getting better and better.....



I like the fact that this isn't much of cross-over but more

of a straight line SM story. Metroanime is getting  a lot

more effective at telling a story.



I don't remember Sailor Moon having that much trouble

transforming but I missed some of the dubs.



The only flaw I see in this is I keep Laughing to hard. I

loved the scene in the night club. Especially his answer and

the effect it had on the enemies.



I also liked the reactions of the Outer Scouts. I thought

they fit their personalities very well.



--

Rick Robinson

RICHARDROBINSON@prodigy.net





If violence is not solving your

problems you're just not using enough of it.



     Misato



"I guess I'm just an old-fashioned sentimentalist at heart.

I refuse

 to accept a no-win scenario.  I hate the thought of a

universe without

 justice.  If the maneuverings of dark powers can't be

exposed and

 defeated by the pure of heart, then there's no point in

anything.  I

 can't believe that."

                               -- Benjamin Hutchins









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