Subject: [FFML] Cheating 00 Reworked and Rereleased
From: Ranmapat01@aol.com
Date: 1/22/2001, 8:18 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

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Thanks for the constructive comments, both about my format and about plot 

points, I changed some stuff around to reflect things that I was ignorant of 

and hopefully this one will hold together a little better.



    I am of course making a work of fiction here and it will diverge from 

cannon so don't assume that everything that I do differently is a mistake, I 

don't object to more C&C but some departures are now more deliberate and made 

with forethought.



I don't own Ranma 1/2, nor do I have any wish to infringe on anybody's legal 

or finacial rights or well being.  This is written purely for amusement and 

not for gain.





Saffron�^�^�s defeat had left time for things to calm down before the inevitable 

return to

Nerima.  The hope of a cure at Jusenkyo was lost to all the cursed parties.  



    Nabiki was making arrangements for their return, talking to Ranma by 

phone in a

small town near the outskirts of the Biankala range.�^�^�... So you have a few 

days to get to

the boat.  I thought you might want to make the most of your time and get 

cured.�^�^�



    �^�^�Weren�^�^�t you listening, Nabiki?  Jusenkyo was destroyed!�^�^�



    �^�^�I�^�^�m not thinking about Jusenkyo, Ranma.  Go to the Musk.�^�^�



    �^�^�The Musk?!  Are you out of your mind!?�^�^�  One hand held the phone glued 

to his

ear while the other gesticulated wildly.  As Nabiki outlined her idea, the 

free arm settled

and a smile grew on his face.  �^�^�Genius, Nabiki, as always...  See you soon.�^�^�



    The others were gathered around him, his father, Ryoga, Mousse, Shampoo, 

and...

Akane...  They all looked expectantly at Ranma.  �^�^�All right, here�^�^�s what 

we�^�^�re gonna

do...�^�^�



    Getting into the fortress of the Musk was easier than anyone had 

anticipated.  With

only the three members of the Musk remaining, it was simple for Ranma and 

Ryoga to

enter undetected.



    Lime and Mint were patrolling the outer wall, but the two young men 

failed to

notice the shadows that slipped through the hole in their pattern.  Within 

the great empty

fortress there was only one occupant.  Herb.



    They found him in his �^�^�Throne Room.�^�^� apparently going over papers.  There

would never be a better time.



    Herb looked up in surprise as the doors to his Throne room were knocked 

off their

hinges.  The last thing he saw before the darkness took him was the flying 

redhead, and

her sandal covered foot.



    Getting out was every bit as easy as getting in.



    The small group was gathered around their campfire, the next morning.  

They had

made good time getting away from the Musk and tomorrow morning they would 

leave on

the boat to Japan.  A pot of water was suspended over the fire until it 

steamed and

bubbled a bit.



    Ranma held the Chuisuiton in his hands.  Amazing how something so ordinary

looking could cause so much trouble.  You wouldn�^�^�t think to look at it that 

it was

anything other than a ladle.



    He looked around himself, at his friends and his family.  �^�^�Let me go 

first, if this

doesn�^�^�t work at least I�^�^�ll still be able to talk.�^�^�  Ryoga looked like he 

might object at first

but then calmed down.



    For a brief moment Ranma and Akane�^�^�s eyes met.  There was something that

passed between them at that moment, not as powerful as the moment she had 

opened her

eyes after Saffron, but it spoke to each of them of the enduring nature of 

that emotion.



    Tears filled Akane�^�^�s eyes as he dipped the ladle and poured the contents 

over his

head.  �^�^�OUCH!�^�^� came his strong voice.  No change.  Then he dipped his own 

cup into the

bucket of cold water, pouring it over his head.  �^�^�Brr!�^�^� came his strong 

voice.  No change.



    �^�^�It worked!  HA!�^�^�  Ranma cartwheeled around the campsite.  He flipped 

into the

air, landing near his love.  �^�^�Akane, I...�^�^�



    �^�^�Ahem!�^�^� came a voice that chilled his blood.



    Turning, Ranma saw the Lord of the Musk, standing just inside the camp.  

They

had all been so intent on the fire and the ladle that they hadn�^�^�t noticed his 

approach.  



    �^�^�All I want is my property, Ranma.  I have no wish to fight the man who 

destroyed

Saffron.�^�^�  Mint and Lime stepped out at other angles, surrounding the camp.  

�^�^�But I will

fight it I must.�^�^�



    �^�^�Herb!�^�^�  Ranma called excitedly.  He was before the young man in an 

instant. 

�^�^�We came up with a cure for Jusenkyo!  Hot water and the Chuisuiton!�^�^�



    �^�^�A... cure?�^�^�  He looked somewhere between impressed and amused.  �^�^�Of 

course. 

How foolish of me.�^�^�  He looked past Ranma at his party.  �^�^�If I allow your... 

cure, will you

return to me the Chuisuiton?�^�^�



    �^�^�Sure, got no use for it after that.  I was gonna mail it back to you 

tomorrow

anyway.�^�^�



    A hint of a smile passed over Herbs face.  He quickly spoke up, �^�^�I can 

always

count on you to try to do the right thing, can�^�^�t I, Ranma?�^�^�



    Genma and Ryoga took advantage of the Chuisuiton�^�^�s power, but Shampoo and

Mousse declined.  �^�^�Cat body is Shampoo punishment from village.  No can take 

away

with honor.�^�^�



    �^�^�I will not leave you to suffer alone, Shampoo!�^�^�  Mousse cried with 

tears in his

eyes as he hugged one of the Musk warriors.





    Twenty years passed in Nerima.  Akane and Ranma were married and lived 

lives

full of danger and adventure.  Ryoga settled down with Akari and was seen 

less and less as

the years passed by.  



    Once the marriage was settled, Cologne and the Amazons stopped their 

chases and

for many years remained a part the lives of the Nerima crew.  Eventually, 

they decided

that their place was home, in China and they departed.



    Ukyo stayed the whole time.  She held a bitterness in her that gradually 

turned to

hate.  Ten years after Saffron and the unification of the Saotome and Tendo 

clans, she

attacked Akane.  The battle lasted for nearly a day, ending in a draw as 

neither woman

could conclusively beat the other.



    For Ukyo, it was therapeutic.  She settled her differences and renewed her

friendship with Ranma and Akane.



    Nabiki never married and eventually went to college, getting a business 

degree. 

She turned her attentions back towards her family after that, bringing new 

moneymaking

ideas to Nerima.



    Kasumi eventually followed after Tofu, the two found each other and lived 

on the

far side of Japan from the family.  There frequent visits, along with their 

son, Soun,

brought both joy and pain into Ranma and Akane�^�^�s lives.  



    Though they had tried, Ranma and Akane seemed doomed not to have 

children. 

Genma and Nodoka, Soun as well, had pressured them for a time, but eventually 

they

stopped when the disappointment and pain to the couple became too much.



    Of course there was excitement enough to turn them away from brooding. 

Together, they went on to fight old gods; new gods; old enemies, such as 

Taro, Happosai-

who seemed to have more energy and stamina the older he got and all new 

enemies. 

Akane seemed a magnet for lost princes and lonely warlords.



    Twenty years passed.



    The bedroom was hot.  He was sweating under the thick blankets.  

Breathing had

become raspy.  His lungs were thick and heavy.  Still he had that cocky smile 

on his pale

face.  �^�^�Don�^�^�t worry, Akane, I�^�^�ll be up and about in no time.  A little thing 

like pnu-�^�^� he

cut himself off with a series of lung scraping coughs that dislodged a small 

amount of

phlegm.  �^�^�This won�^�^�t keep me down.�^�^�  What little strength he had seemed to 

be leaking

out of him rapidly.



    Akane was at his side as the last rattles of breath left his weakened 

body.  She sat

there, by his side, crying for a time.



    A short time later, the ambulance arrived.  It seemed kind of ironic, to 

Nabiki that

they sent an ambulance to pick up the body.  The medical teams were there to 

save lives,

but here and now they were too late and they knew it.  The men solemnly 

followed Tofu

up to the body.  



    She couldn�^�^�t make her mind wrap around the idea that it was Ranma.  That 

he

was....  Ranma always got out of everything.  Since they were children, 

nothing could

touch him in a lasting way.  Not even Jusenkyo.



    Noone had thought anything of it at first, just a cough.  It progressed 

rapidly into

something worse.  He was only sick a couple of days.  Did people die from 

pneumonia in

just a couple of days?



    He had been tired from the fight.  He was then single-handedly able to 

destroy the

tidal wave from within, using the Hiryou Shouten Ha.  He admitted that he�^�^�d 

swallowed

some water but seemed okay.



    Akane was crying into Kasumi�^�^�s shoulder, still unable to speak after 

watching her

husband fade so rapidly.  Soun had gone to get the Saotomes and bring them 

here.  Ukyo

looked stricken.  Her face was a blank mask.



    Tofu and the EMT�^�^�s came back down the stairs.  Tofu had a smile plastered 

on his

face that only his wife could have seen through.  The EMT�^�^�s weren�^�^�t smiling. 

 �^�^�You do

realize we could press charges.  Misuse of the Emergency Response System is a 

crime.�^�^�



    �^�^�I do apologize again.  We can�^�^�t begin to tell you how sorry the family 

is,�^�^� Tofu

was saying.  The couple and their son had been on their way back when they 

heard about

the attack by the �^�^�Son of a Hundred Spirits.�^�^�  They had only arrived a few 

minutes after

Ranma�^�^�s passing.  Getting into and out of Nerima was difficult right now 

because of the

property damage caused by the fight.



    �^�^�Its only because he lives here that I�^�^�m willing to let this slide.�^�^�



    �^�^�I understand, sir.�^�^�  Tofu continued placating them even as he ushered 

them out

the door.



    As soon as he returned to the family, Akane asked, �^�^�Why didn�^�^�t they take 

Ran- 

why didn�^�^�t they take him?�^�^�



    Tofu ran his hand over his mouth, as though massaging it for a moment.  

�^�^�Come

with me, all of you.�^�^�  He turned without another word and walked up the 

stairs to the

master bedroom.



    Lying on the bed, breathing softly, was a sixteen year old red headed 

girl.



    �^�^�Oh, my!�^�^�  







    







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