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Good story, Dave!
This seems to me more involving than HH #1, probably
because it's longer but also seems more mature.
The way the narrative switches back and forth over
time shows that a considerable amount of thought
went into this story.
You effectively make me feel the pain of most of the
characters, too.
Again, good work!