Subject: [FFML] [ranma] [dark] [idea] telltale scratch
From: hmelton@daviscomp.com
Date: 12/8/2000, 1:19 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

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Mr. james Barnhill a nice fusion shortfic. It made me think of"The Tell

Tale Heart". 





I think royoga needs to hear the "Tell tale scratch".

this story idea spamfic was inspired by a A "tell tale heart" and a

"casket of nanichaun". 

 

I was going to develope it more but it kept falling apart.

 

You need to at least read James Barnhills "casket of nanichaun" for it

to have any chance at all of making sense.



/\/\/\/\Tell tale scratch or Ranma because of you I'm in hell/ \/\/\/\/\



It took me 3 weeks to understand the scratching sound in the silence of the night and it was another week before I heard the  first brick fall and the soft pawing sound of a small hand feeling around the opening in the bricks looking for a weak point with a sob the scratching starts again.



 The day after the first brick I take my travel pack and tell akane I have to check on family with a sigh and a caress she sadly says hurry back, I dont want to lose you.

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I've searched and searched for over a year now, but I can't find the

island, eight more bricks have gone the way of the first. 

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At first I tried to find the noisiest places to sleep to deafen me to the

scratching, but each brick has gotten louder and louder until I worry

that someone else will hear the tell tale scratch and know my secret.

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After 12 year-er-bricks and two bric-er-years its finally gotten worse last night the scratching STOPPED. The sweet silence was broken by a soft

thump of a body falling a short distance close on the heels of this

noise was a low insane giggle that merged to the yowls of a cat.

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It ends tonight for over a week I've stayed awake in the silence of the

night and run when the yowls came, but tonight I fell asleep and now

he/she's is here quickly I pull by belt off and form a sword screaming "I WIN" I fall on my sword denying nekoranma any chance of regaining her sanity by satisfying her revenge by killing me spitting up blood I gurgle out my last laugh as the world darkens forever.

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In hell a new voice rises above the general level of the screams it

seems to be saying "RANMA BECAUSE OF YOU I'M IN HELL".

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/\/\/\/\/\/\/





Blame this on my High school english lit teacher, as a rule I usually

skip dark fiction but she had all her classes read Edger allen poe.



Reading Mr. barnhills fusion made me think of Raven and a few other of

Mr. Poe's works.



howard melton



God bless













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